Please could anyone help me to get ideas for this topic :)
Describe The dullest party in teenage history ...:D:) Thanks alot
can you write all the subject because i didn't understant about what you are talking
Well :S, Sorry for not showing my question clear
I was thinking of writing a letter describing the dullest party in teenage history
I got some ideas like : 1)The dining room table is set with glasses of buttermilk.
2)Orchestra music wafts from the stereo like a bad odor.
3)Nobody is allowed to hold hands.
4)Everyone is asked to use quiet "inside" voices.
Hope you could help me with more ideas. :) Thanks alot :)
Im sorry I meant
I was thinking of writing an essay--->describing the dullest party in teenage history
Sorry again....Thank you :D
You should talk about a party where felt uncomfortable and knew you didnt wanna be around those people..
or you could talk about a metaphor about how a dull party lacks preparation and how to be a successful person, you always have to be prepared. or something like that
Ok, Thank you :D
did my advice help? WHat did you end up writing about??
Yes ,It helped me alot..Thank you
I wrote in the first paragraph
" To throw a successful party there has to be good music. Dance music is a must at any party because everybody likes to hit the dance floor and have a good time but it seems like I went to an over 60 women party " . That was the introduction, Hope you like it :D .
Sorry for answering you back late, I was just too busy to check the site :D:)Thx
To throw a successful party, one needs to have good music.
Use a comma to separate the 2 parts of a compound sentence:
Dance music is a must at any party because everybody likes to hit the dance floor and have a good time. --- You can use this INSTEAD OF the first sentence, because it says the same thing in a more detailed way. You don't need both.
... but it seems like I went to an over 60 women party.--- what does this part mean? Did you suddenly start talking about the dull party? If so, you should introduce the idea:
Dance music is a must at any party because everybody likes to hit the dance floor and have a good time. However, one party I attended had no music, and it felt like a party for senior citizens.
That way is clearer, but I think it might not be good to say the party is dully by equating it with a party for old people. I know some senior citizens that really know how to party!
:-)