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A person whom I admire? Need a start !



Manish kumar 1 / 2  
Aug 4, 2012   #1
What should I write a person whom I admire?.There are many people around me whom I love & like very much.

KhanhZ 5 / 131  
Aug 4, 2012   #2
Hi, Kumar)
First of all you need an original approach: talking about how your virtuous parents affected you is kinda banal. Choose someone different. Include some direct speech and make your essay feel personal as much as you can. For now, those are the only suggestions I can think of.

Submit your essay here and I might be able to give your some better ideas))
samenmohammad 10 / 19  
Aug 5, 2012   #3
You could admire everybody if you see them better. I think select a person who are more similar to u.
It is not clear that your problem is the choosing process or writing in English process!
Good Luck
Tucayana 1 / 5  
Aug 5, 2012   #4
Hi there! in my opinion you should think about who you admire and why. And then write about the person whose reason for you to admire her/him means the most to you. Hope this helped!
OP Manish kumar 1 / 2  
Aug 7, 2012   #5
Will you please help me in my essay,"Describe the best month of the year"
jmike 2 / 4  
Aug 8, 2012   #6
I would not talk about my parents as that is very original. What are your hobbies? Who is someone very important or well known in that hobby. You could write about them. I had to write an essay about someone who was important to me and I wrote about Freddie Wong, an internet director. (I am interested in directing) Well I hope this helps!
PBP 3 / 9  
Aug 8, 2012   #7
I think If you have ever met a stranger and he has affected your life, that would be the best person to write about. Writing about your parents if very original. Maybe you could chose a family friend or someone you know at work?


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