We are to write an essay that defines a personality type. The example was "disneyland dads"
The instructor is very particular about thesis statements and im new to all this..well, its been 15 years.
I have several of these, so Im thinking of doing my paper on fair weather friends. i have some ideas on what a fair weather friend is:
a friend when circumstances are pleasant or profitable
most likely to appear when they are in need or, at best, when you are not in need.
a fair-weather friend will only be nice to you if he or she is having a good day, or if he or she gets something out of being nice
expects you to be there for them but doesn't reciprocate
I guess i just need help with a catchy thesis statement mine sound so generic and dull. Ex: fair weather friends are the worst kind to have.
it has the subject and the opinion but its just blah!
i didnt have that great of an english teacher...she taught us that an essay was just a story. when i took my GED i failed that part and learned on my OWN that an essay has a format! I wasnt taught about thesis statements either.
im open to all ideas. thank you for any help you can offer.
The instructor is very particular about thesis statements and im new to all this..well, its been 15 years.
I have several of these, so Im thinking of doing my paper on fair weather friends. i have some ideas on what a fair weather friend is:
a friend when circumstances are pleasant or profitable
most likely to appear when they are in need or, at best, when you are not in need.
a fair-weather friend will only be nice to you if he or she is having a good day, or if he or she gets something out of being nice
expects you to be there for them but doesn't reciprocate
I guess i just need help with a catchy thesis statement mine sound so generic and dull. Ex: fair weather friends are the worst kind to have.
it has the subject and the opinion but its just blah!
i didnt have that great of an english teacher...she taught us that an essay was just a story. when i took my GED i failed that part and learned on my OWN that an essay has a format! I wasnt taught about thesis statements either.
im open to all ideas. thank you for any help you can offer.