Requesting Advice on the Flow and Structure of My Essay

Hello Everyone,

For one of my college courses, I'm writing an argumentative essay right now, and I would really appreciate some feedback on how to make the text flow better. Even though I am confident in my research and reasoning, I frequently find it difficult to put my ideas into a clear and compelling narrative that draws the reader in.

I'm specifically searching for advice on how to keep a logical flow, make seamless transitions between paragraphs, and make sure that my introduction and conclusion successfully connect the entire essay. Although I've read about the value of cohesive devices and topic sentences, I still struggle to use these ideas consistently.

I also find it difficult to condense my major point into a single, succinct sentence, so I would appreciate any advice on how to make my thesis statement more clear.

I would greatly appreciate it if someone could offer examples or direct me to sites that could be of assistance!

Thank you in advance.

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