Technology and new generation - need help with my thesis statement

I am writing an argumentative essay on positive and negative effects of technology on new generation.
What i have come up with:

The idea of existing and communicating at each individuals level, sharing through the linguistic miracle while multitasking, seeking convenience, is because the way of thinking has changed.

Can talk about the deteriorating of social skills because everyone is glued to their gadgets. Also, the convenience leads us to being more comfortable and less patient. Cannot control emotion and lack of tolerance.

RCWW1, first of all, you should be able to write your own essay. Actually you're already off to a good start, being able to come up with the subject of your essay.

Now, I understand that it's rather easy to think than to write but believe me when you get into it, you will go on writing.

There's a lot of things to talk about, specially because your topic is very broad, a lot of discussion can be made.

I lined up a few guidelines for you;

- what is the cause and effect of technology in our lives

- does it out weigh the disadvantages that technology brings

- does it answer the problems that we have

- what are the ways to utilize technology to the welfare of humankind

I hope this guidelines help you.

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