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'America is not just a country it is an idea' Why master degree in USA? Cover Letter.


SHanafi 120 / 415 93  
Mar 22, 2015   #1
Give your reason for wanting to pursue them in the U.S. Describe the kind of program you expect to undertake, and explain how your proposed field of study fits in with your educational background, your professional background, your future objectives, and your future involvement in community development.

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America is not just a country it is an idea. America brings the sense can do spirit in almost entire of humankind. From McCormick feeding the world to Rockefeller revolutionized energy and medicine, America has been proved within the power of idea, impossibilities become possible covert with expert. In the area of Psychology, however, American Psychological Association (APA) not only stance stronger as the world largest psychological profession association but also through its Disaster Response Network (DRN), in recent decades, has attempted the leading of adequate disaster mental health assistance. I hope that studying through the coveted of American-trained master degree will complete my future proficient service to be high qualified.

An ethical obligation on psychological services plays a vital role so as to provide proficient care. In order to do this, professionals should have sophisticated training and skills needed even though those who had some workshops or minimal training still able to provide counseling and psychological service. This what I want to pursue by studying through MA International Disaster Psychology (MAIDP), University of Denver, which will lead me towards my dream to be a disaster mental health professional. MAIDP program was created in response to the observation that there really were no training programs for international disaster psychology or such programs at graduate level. Even more, the 8 weeks mandatory internship within MAIDP's program could be even more difficult than I might imagine as this will be the real struggle to prove textual lesson into practice in the real world, the work is often in poor, under-served and sometimes dangerous, but it might provide the excellent experience that I dream of.

Furthermore, I plan to use my license to educate, train and prepare potential disastrous people in my country not only in terms of emergency but also in preparedness to reduce the risk of unavoidable hazard. I dream to spread out the essential of disaster psychology in my country, Indonesia, through the service provided by GO or NGO. Particularly, the work in the disaster area in Indonesia was begun since a large scale of Earthquake and Tsunami hitting Nangroe Aceh Darussalam (NAD) and North Sumatera in the year 2004 which was claiming the lives of 165,708 people, and inflicting property loses of 4.45 IDR trillion. Meanwhile, educational jurisdictions also raised its awareness in providing disaster postgraduate programs, but unless master applied of disaster psychology in University of Indonesia no programs as yet concentrated in the area of disaster psychology. The fact shows that the area of relieving, reducing and recovering the survivors' mental health state will be one of the essential field that on my local communities needed nor mitigating the survivor mental health is more crucial for some certain areas. I wish that finishing my bachelor degree in psychology, volunteering in Merapi eruption in 2010, working in rural community service for this recent years and prospective studying in MAIDP will open my opportunity to work in my dream job, helping vulnerable people in emergency professionally.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Mar 23, 2015   #2
Give your reason ... Describe the kind of .... explain how your proposed ... fits in with your educational background...professional background...future objectives, and your future involvement ...

The first thing I notice is that they ask you to do 6 things with this essay. That is a lot. So you should check to see if you answered all 6 of them. The person who judges your essay needs to use a logical way of measuring how good they think it is, and the most common way is to check whether the writer directly answered each part of the prompt. Sometimes it's even good to use one paragraph to respond to each part of the prompt.

America is not just a country it is an idea. ---- This is a run-on sentence. You can fix it by putting a semi-colon after the word 'country'.

America brings represents the sense can-do spirit in almost entire of humankind.

Make sure the verbs match each other in the sentence, so you'll have a nice writing style and correct grammar:
From McCormick feeding the world to Rockefeller revolutionized revolutionizing ...

An Providers of psychological services have an ethical obligation to plays a vital role so as to provide ensure proficient care. In order to do this, professionals...

Even more, Moreover, the 8-week mandatory internship within MAIDP's program could be even more difficult than I might imagine, as this will be ...

Furthermore, It's okay to use this word, but I think it is bulky and takes power out of the sentence. I suggest:
I plan to use my license to ...

I like your ideas! Your English grammar needs improvement, and you'll do very well to improve it by participating at EssayForum.

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lynzee22 - / 90 37  
Mar 23, 2015   #3
I agree that a good place to start is to answer each part of the prompt in separate paragraphs. That gives the reader the easiest way of knowing how good it is. If it is not clear, they will probably assume you did not answer it all and dismiss your paper.

America brings the sense can do spirit in almost entire of humankindto the world .

In the area of Psychology, however, American Psychological Association (APA) not only stance stronger as the world largest psychological profession association but also through its Disaster Response Network (DRN), in recent decades, has attempted the leading of adequate disaster mental health assistance. I had to re-read this a few times to start to get it. I would re-word it.

the first thing that needs to be done is re-working this so it answers all of the parts of the prompts clearly. re-post what you do here so we can help you out some more

Hope this helped.


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