Give your reason ... Describe the kind of .... explain how your proposed ... fits in with your educational background...professional background...future objectives, and your future involvement ...
The first thing I notice is that they ask you to do 6 things with this essay. That is a lot. So you should check to see if you answered all 6 of them. The person who judges your essay needs to use a logical way of measuring how good they think it is, and the most common way is to check whether the writer directly answered each part of the prompt. Sometimes it's even good to use one paragraph to respond to each part of the prompt.
America is not just a country it is an idea. ---- This is a run-on sentence. You can fix it by putting a semi-colon after the word 'country'.
America
brings represents the
sense can-do spirit
in almost entire of humankind.
Make sure the verbs match each other in the sentence, so you'll have a nice writing style and correct grammar:
From McCormick feeding the world to Rockefeller
revolutionized revolutionizing ...
An Providers of psychological services have an ethical obligation to
plays a vital role so as to provide e
nsure proficient care. In order to do this, professionals...
Even more, Moreover, the
8-week mandatory internship within MAIDP's program could be even more difficult than I
might imagine
, as this will be ...
Furthermore, It's okay to use this word, but I think it is bulky and takes power out of the sentence. I suggest:
I plan to use my license to ...
I like your ideas! Your English grammar needs improvement, and you'll do very well to improve it by participating at EssayForum.
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