'business essentials related to Management Consulting' - Ivey Business School

1st Essay topic : How will the Ivey MBA Program help you to achieve your short-term goals? (250 Words)

Answer : My short term goal is to enhance my practical knowledge in various business essentials related to Management Consulting like Accounting, Operations, Marketing, Finance, Strategy, and Leadership. When I learn the business essentials, I also target to expose myself to the diverse culture and traditions and to develop myself as an International citizen. Achievement of my short term goals will provide directions to the journey towards my long term goal. My long term goal is to lead a reputed multi-national management consulting firm.

I plan to achieve my short term goal by an international level of learning through an established curriculum, from peers and faculty who are experts in their fields with excellent professional and academic backgrounds. This way I will be able to accelerate my learning cycle.

The Ivey MBA program promotes the concept of Case Method based learning. I believe that I can extract maximum from a program if it can provide practical real world learning, which is very similar to Ivey MBA Program. In my stint at Ivey, I can maximize my knowledge acquisition on the various business essentials.

The class profile of an Ivey MBA display high diversity of students, in terms of nationality, culture and profession. Such a diverse academic environment will provide opportunity for one to develop at an International level. Hence this attribute of Ivey MBA program fits with my short term goal.

To summarize, I believe that Ivey MBA program can provide enormous acceleration to my pace to achieve my short term goals.

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Please provide feedback on the essay.

Overall I think you articulate your goals succinctly and present your ideas well. Here are a few more suggested modifications

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Thanks a lot Kisha,

I have removed that "Learning Cycle" line. As it has confused you, there is a high probability that it will confuse the admission committee as well. I have now revised my eaasy, and all thanks to you, I looks more neat and concise. I am pasting it below for a final read. Please be very critical in providing your comments.

How will the Ivey MBA Program help you to achieve your short-term goals?
My short term goal is to enhance my practical knowledge in various business essentials related to management consulting such as accounting, operations, marketing, finance, strategy, and leadership. After learning the business essentials, it is my objective to expose myself to the diverse cultures and traditions and to develop myself as an international citizen. Achievement of my short term goals will provide directions to the journey towards my long term goal: to lead a reputed multi-national management consulting firm.

I plan to achieve my short term goal by an international level of learning through an established curriculum in a challenging environment. Interaction with peers and faculty who are experts in their fields with excellent professional and academic backgrounds will enhance the quality of my international experience.

The Ivey MBA program promotes the concept of Case Method based learning. I believe that I can extract the most from a program if it can provide practical real world learning, which is an attribute of Ivey MBA Program. During my time at Ivey, I can maximize my knowledge acquisition on the various business essentials.

In terms of nationality, culture and profession, the class profile of Ivey MBA reflects a diverse student population. Such a diverse academic environment will provide opportunity for one to develop at an International level. Hence this attribute of Ivey MBA program fits with my short term goal.

In sum, I believe that Ivey MBA program can provide enormous acceleration in my pace to achieve my short term goals.

(248 Words)

Everything looks good, aside for some final suggested revisions below.
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I am so so so thankful to you.

Can I ask you for more reviews of my other two essays at Ivey ? I know you are providing your valuable time, for which I will always be indebted.

Lots of thanks once again. :)

Sure.