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Completing MSc Finance course I want to take CFA exam. Due to this course I will pass CFA exam. The knowledge got at Imperial College Business School and CFA qualification will help me to realize my next short term goals. These are to work in any motivated and famous financial company and to become a fianancial independent person. I am sure that completing MSc Finance course and CFA will give me an opportunity to achieve my second and third goals. All I want to use my knowledge for developing my skills in financial sphere. In one word to become a good specialist. I intent to do also PHD. All of this goals ,course at your university, CFA quallification, PHD and work experience will be my ticket for my future and recondition to achieve my long term goals.
Completing MSc Finance course I want to take CFA exam. Due to this course I will pass CFA exam. The knowledge got at Imperial College Business School and CFA qualification will help me to realize my next short term goals. These are to work in any motivated and famous financial company and to become a fianancial independent person. I am sure that completing MSc Finance course and CFA will give me an opportunity to achieve my second and third goals. All I want to use my knowledge for developing my skills in financial sphere. In one word to become a good specialist. I intent to do also PHD. All of this goals ,course at your university, CFA quallification, PHD and work experience will be my ticket for my future and recondition to achieve my long term goals.
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