Dear Sir/Madam,
I have written a motivation letter for admission to graduate for MS in computer science. Please review and suggest me how to improve it and what changes need to be made.
Thanks!!!
Gautam Kumar
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From the beginning, I was very interested towards mathematics and physics. I have always the eagerness to complete the mathematics and physics problems fast. I was very good student of mathematics and physics in my class. The mentor often appreciates my sincerity and eagerness to learn. At standard eight, I got the first opportunity to study computer and it was very important moment to know about new technology. I was very good in solving logical problems at school and as the time passes my interest towards computer also grows.
Due to eagerness towards computer, I decided to study Computer Engineering at my undergraduate level. However, initially I was facing problems with programming syntax and logic but as the time passes I was able to generate my own logic. My field of interest is in Software Engineering and Database Management System. Software Engineering is very interesting because it gives the idea of standard way of system design, coding and testing which help me a lot while working in a software company. Earlier, I was not aware of the core concepts behind the management of databases. But after studying the subject DBMS in the sixth semester, I learned the concepts of huge databases and its implementations with PHP. In sixth semester, we have to complete a minor project as a part of curriculum and I have chosen Online Postal Service with .net as front end and MS-SQL as backend. The main objective of this project was to ease the process of traditional regular mail. We have made the tracking system to know the user about the status of their mail. In the final year, we in a team completed a project Online Reservation System Using SMS with PHP as frontend and MYSQL as backend. The system was like you can reserve the ticket online and system will send back confirmation SMS upon successful reservation.
On the basis of my project accomplishment, I got the job in Software Company and learned how to design the system according to client needs. It was a wonderful moment because I was doing things in real world. I learned how to do standard coding, debugging techniques, database designing, user end design, how to communicate and implement client requirements in a project. I worked in three companies and also as a freelancer for two and half years and get good knowledge of current technologies and methods to accomplish the project.
My program of interest is MS in Computer Science so that I will be able to conduct research through the facilities available at the University as well as to work with professionals during my academic tenure. I am looking forward to gain immense knowledge and experience. I am applying to acquire various set of advance knowledge and MS degree which will in a long run further develop my professional career.
I have written a motivation letter for admission to graduate for MS in computer science. Please review and suggest me how to improve it and what changes need to be made.
Thanks!!!
Gautam Kumar
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From the beginning, I was very interested towards mathematics and physics. I have always the eagerness to complete the mathematics and physics problems fast. I was very good student of mathematics and physics in my class. The mentor often appreciates my sincerity and eagerness to learn. At standard eight, I got the first opportunity to study computer and it was very important moment to know about new technology. I was very good in solving logical problems at school and as the time passes my interest towards computer also grows.
Due to eagerness towards computer, I decided to study Computer Engineering at my undergraduate level. However, initially I was facing problems with programming syntax and logic but as the time passes I was able to generate my own logic. My field of interest is in Software Engineering and Database Management System. Software Engineering is very interesting because it gives the idea of standard way of system design, coding and testing which help me a lot while working in a software company. Earlier, I was not aware of the core concepts behind the management of databases. But after studying the subject DBMS in the sixth semester, I learned the concepts of huge databases and its implementations with PHP. In sixth semester, we have to complete a minor project as a part of curriculum and I have chosen Online Postal Service with .net as front end and MS-SQL as backend. The main objective of this project was to ease the process of traditional regular mail. We have made the tracking system to know the user about the status of their mail. In the final year, we in a team completed a project Online Reservation System Using SMS with PHP as frontend and MYSQL as backend. The system was like you can reserve the ticket online and system will send back confirmation SMS upon successful reservation.
On the basis of my project accomplishment, I got the job in Software Company and learned how to design the system according to client needs. It was a wonderful moment because I was doing things in real world. I learned how to do standard coding, debugging techniques, database designing, user end design, how to communicate and implement client requirements in a project. I worked in three companies and also as a freelancer for two and half years and get good knowledge of current technologies and methods to accomplish the project.
My program of interest is MS in Computer Science so that I will be able to conduct research through the facilities available at the University as well as to work with professionals during my academic tenure. I am looking forward to gain immense knowledge and experience. I am applying to acquire various set of advance knowledge and MS degree which will in a long run further develop my professional career.
