Hello everyone,
I was asked by one of the schools that I am applying to to write an addendum to my personal statement for a PA school. I need to describe my experience shadowing a Physician Assistant. I have never written an addendum before and was not sure how to organize it. I have questions like, should I title it, should I write the date, my name and ID number, should I address the Admission's committee as in a letter and etc..Also, I am not sure how long does it need to be. I assumed that all this things are most likely not too crucial but I would appreciate any tips.
Here is what I have so far:
Addendum to a PA Application Essay
Dear Admission's Committee,
This summer I had the opportunity to shadow PA M. in Emergency Medicine by following her all the way through an exciting and especially eventful day. I was astonished to directly witness her recover a patient from a severe allergic reaction while simultaneously assisting with two other emergency cases. She also got me involved by letting me help in providing first aid. Later on, she encouraged me to perform a basic eye check on a patient and introduced me to the computer system used in the clinic. Being able to see what pulmonary edema looked like on an X-ray was particularly exciting, however, most of all I was thrilled to observe a case of Lyme disease, which, as I was told, is not a common occurrence in the clinic.
While PA M. was diagnosing patients, she did not miss a chance to provide me with explanations and teach me facts about interpreting symptoms. After examining a patient with difficulty swallowing, who was quick to self-diagnose himself with strep throat, PA M. determined it was a viral infection instead. Her conclusion was based on the additional symptoms she caught by asking further questions. She pointed out that in medicine one of the most difficult parts in detecting a problem is when a patient tries to match their symptoms to a certain diagnosis. As a result of this, the doctors may not hear the entire history of symptoms, which ultimately can lead to a wrong diagnosis.
Another interesting aspect of this learning experience was witnessing how patient behavior could give rise to ethical issues. As when the daughter of a patient, without further explanation, requested that no man of color should be present in the room while her mother was being examined. She insisted the medical assistant, who was already helping her, to leave the room and somebody else to take over. Even though PA M. and Dr. S. were obviously disturbed by the accident, instead of simply reflecting anger back to the patient, they were subtle and gave the person a chance to explain the reasoning behind this request. We were informed that her mother has Alzheimer's and becomes extremely aggressive in the presence of Black and Asian people. Considering the degree of pain her mother was already experiencing, the daughter was trying to prevent additional complications. I was impressed by how professionally this matter was approached and resolved. This taught me to not only expect such patients but also to react by attempting to understand what is motivating their behaviors rather than showing personal emotions and anger back to them. Also, it gave me a different perspective on the various states of emotions a patient could be going through.
After this day I came home feeling a sense of accomplishment, confidence and better understanding of the Physician Assistant's significance to a human life. By spending time with PA M., I had a chance to openly observe the demands and rewards of the profession. Even though this opportunity reassured me in my aspiration to become a Physician Assistant, recognizing the serious dedication involved, helped me be more aware of the intensity of such work. My future plans for preparing involve starting the Premedical Volunteer Program of the Hospital of__ this September, which, will further expand my exposure to medicine and train me better for the challenges of PA school.
P.S. I am still debating if I should include the third paragraph, which starts with Initially...I am not sure it adds a lot to the experience and to what I have learned but I feel like I need a second opinion on that.
Thank you!!!
I was asked by one of the schools that I am applying to to write an addendum to my personal statement for a PA school. I need to describe my experience shadowing a Physician Assistant. I have never written an addendum before and was not sure how to organize it. I have questions like, should I title it, should I write the date, my name and ID number, should I address the Admission's committee as in a letter and etc..Also, I am not sure how long does it need to be. I assumed that all this things are most likely not too crucial but I would appreciate any tips.
Here is what I have so far:
Addendum to a PA Application Essay
Dear Admission's Committee,
This summer I had the opportunity to shadow PA M. in Emergency Medicine by following her all the way through an exciting and especially eventful day. I was astonished to directly witness her recover a patient from a severe allergic reaction while simultaneously assisting with two other emergency cases. She also got me involved by letting me help in providing first aid. Later on, she encouraged me to perform a basic eye check on a patient and introduced me to the computer system used in the clinic. Being able to see what pulmonary edema looked like on an X-ray was particularly exciting, however, most of all I was thrilled to observe a case of Lyme disease, which, as I was told, is not a common occurrence in the clinic.
While PA M. was diagnosing patients, she did not miss a chance to provide me with explanations and teach me facts about interpreting symptoms. After examining a patient with difficulty swallowing, who was quick to self-diagnose himself with strep throat, PA M. determined it was a viral infection instead. Her conclusion was based on the additional symptoms she caught by asking further questions. She pointed out that in medicine one of the most difficult parts in detecting a problem is when a patient tries to match their symptoms to a certain diagnosis. As a result of this, the doctors may not hear the entire history of symptoms, which ultimately can lead to a wrong diagnosis.
Another interesting aspect of this learning experience was witnessing how patient behavior could give rise to ethical issues. As when the daughter of a patient, without further explanation, requested that no man of color should be present in the room while her mother was being examined. She insisted the medical assistant, who was already helping her, to leave the room and somebody else to take over. Even though PA M. and Dr. S. were obviously disturbed by the accident, instead of simply reflecting anger back to the patient, they were subtle and gave the person a chance to explain the reasoning behind this request. We were informed that her mother has Alzheimer's and becomes extremely aggressive in the presence of Black and Asian people. Considering the degree of pain her mother was already experiencing, the daughter was trying to prevent additional complications. I was impressed by how professionally this matter was approached and resolved. This taught me to not only expect such patients but also to react by attempting to understand what is motivating their behaviors rather than showing personal emotions and anger back to them. Also, it gave me a different perspective on the various states of emotions a patient could be going through.
After this day I came home feeling a sense of accomplishment, confidence and better understanding of the Physician Assistant's significance to a human life. By spending time with PA M., I had a chance to openly observe the demands and rewards of the profession. Even though this opportunity reassured me in my aspiration to become a Physician Assistant, recognizing the serious dedication involved, helped me be more aware of the intensity of such work. My future plans for preparing involve starting the Premedical Volunteer Program of the Hospital of__ this September, which, will further expand my exposure to medicine and train me better for the challenges of PA school.
P.S. I am still debating if I should include the third paragraph, which starts with Initially...I am not sure it adds a lot to the experience and to what I have learned but I feel like I need a second opinion on that.
Thank you!!!