Looking for honest feedback on essay. First time applying to med school.
My curiosity for medicine materialized by growing up going to Cook County Hospital (currently known as John Stroger Medical Center) and observing how doctors went the extra mile to help patients. When I was younger, my family did not have the luxury of being able to afford medical insurance. John Stroger Medical Center provided my family with all of our medical care. Through this experience I saw first hand how patients in an urban community were treated. The quality of health care is adequate, but the vast number of patients compared to the number of doctors is astounding. Patients either wait long hours or give up and leave without seeing the doctor at all. The realization of this dilemma inspired my current decision to volunteer at a free clinic and my future aspirations of practicing medicine at an urban hospital such as John Stroger Medical Center. John Stroger Medical Center showed me that a true medical professional cares for the patient regardless of race, creed, living arrangements, or employment status. That is what I want to do; I want to be a doctor that gives privileged services to the underprivileged, especially underprivileged children.
Growing up on the West side of Chicago, because of my mom's profession, I spent a considerable amount of time in day care centers and after school programs. During this time I saw first hand how children suffered and died from preventable aliments because of inadequate health care or medical facilities. This observation provoked a concern in me for the well being of children and for underprivileged children especially. While working with my mother in her home daycare, I saw children with all types of medical problems, ranging from . This experience delineated my interest in the medical specialty of pediatric. This concern also prompted me to accept a position at Children's Memorial Hospital in the neurobiology laboratory as a research assistant. To help children with different medical problems and to alleviate many of the medical issues that is plaguing our youth is truly a cause that is dear to my heart.
However, with great dreams comes an even greater sacrifice. In the course of my educational voyage, I made the decision to be employed while in school due to financial hardship. That was neither an easy decision nor road to travel down. For many years prior to this decision, my focus was on my studies and making good grades. For the past couple of years I had to've had to divide my time between work and school. Eventually through trail and error, I developed a schedule that allowed me to complete every task.
Working in different capacities has made me a well-rounded person. I have worked as a private math tutor, library assistant, secretary, waiter, cashier, custodial worker and assistant to professors, all in an effort to ensure that I stay in school and reach my goal of becoming a physician. In the latter part of my undergraduate studies, I had the privilege of being trained and working as an undergraduate research assistant at Chicago State University Department of Biological Science Research Laboratory. This experience propelled me into my current position as a research assistant at Children's Memorial Hospital. For me this is one of the greatest accomplishments of my life, because I never thought I would be doing research that could help cure children of febrile seizures.
I am grateful to God for the opportunities He has placed in my life. Some of the experiences that I have encountered I would have thought impossible when I was younger, but now I truly see that anything is possible if you first believe and then act on that belief. Through the ten years it has taken me to get to this point, I believe I have matured and will develop (with proper medical training) into the physician parents can entrust their child's life into the hands of.
My curiosity for medicine materialized by growing up going to Cook County Hospital (currently known as John Stroger Medical Center) and observing how doctors went the extra mile to help patients. When I was younger, my family did not have the luxury of being able to afford medical insurance. John Stroger Medical Center provided my family with all of our medical care. Through this experience I saw first hand how patients in an urban community were treated. The quality of health care is adequate, but the vast number of patients compared to the number of doctors is astounding. Patients either wait long hours or give up and leave without seeing the doctor at all. The realization of this dilemma inspired my current decision to volunteer at a free clinic and my future aspirations of practicing medicine at an urban hospital such as John Stroger Medical Center. John Stroger Medical Center showed me that a true medical professional cares for the patient regardless of race, creed, living arrangements, or employment status. That is what I want to do; I want to be a doctor that gives privileged services to the underprivileged, especially underprivileged children.
Growing up on the West side of Chicago, because of my mom's profession, I spent a considerable amount of time in day care centers and after school programs. During this time I saw first hand how children suffered and died from preventable aliments because of inadequate health care or medical facilities. This observation provoked a concern in me for the well being of children and for underprivileged children especially. While working with my mother in her home daycare, I saw children with all types of medical problems, ranging from . This experience delineated my interest in the medical specialty of pediatric. This concern also prompted me to accept a position at Children's Memorial Hospital in the neurobiology laboratory as a research assistant. To help children with different medical problems and to alleviate many of the medical issues that is plaguing our youth is truly a cause that is dear to my heart.
However, with great dreams comes an even greater sacrifice. In the course of my educational voyage, I made the decision to be employed while in school due to financial hardship. That was neither an easy decision nor road to travel down. For many years prior to this decision, my focus was on my studies and making good grades. For the past couple of years I had to've had to divide my time between work and school. Eventually through trail and error, I developed a schedule that allowed me to complete every task.
Working in different capacities has made me a well-rounded person. I have worked as a private math tutor, library assistant, secretary, waiter, cashier, custodial worker and assistant to professors, all in an effort to ensure that I stay in school and reach my goal of becoming a physician. In the latter part of my undergraduate studies, I had the privilege of being trained and working as an undergraduate research assistant at Chicago State University Department of Biological Science Research Laboratory. This experience propelled me into my current position as a research assistant at Children's Memorial Hospital. For me this is one of the greatest accomplishments of my life, because I never thought I would be doing research that could help cure children of febrile seizures.
I am grateful to God for the opportunities He has placed in my life. Some of the experiences that I have encountered I would have thought impossible when I was younger, but now I truly see that anything is possible if you first believe and then act on that belief. Through the ten years it has taken me to get to this point, I believe I have matured and will develop (with proper medical training) into the physician parents can entrust their child's life into the hands of.