Hello,
This is the first time I am writing an essay for my part-time MBA admission. Please help me to improve by providing your valuable comments. I overshot the word limit by few words (290 instead of 250), so please suggest wherever you feel I can reduce that.
Thanks in anticipation!
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What are your short-term and long-term career goals? (250 words)
I was brought up into being a very responsible person by a single mother working very hard to provide the basic necessities to her 3 children - good values, education and living standard. Seeing her, taught me to fight my own battles and be the best in what I do. After completing my formal education, I stepped into the professional world at an early age of 20 and gained diverse experience in different technologies as well as domains.
My short term goal is to apply my past experience, business acumen, technical edge and education to propose and oversee robust and cost effective engineering solutions, managing an effective team, experience key aspects of managing a business and achieve professional advances in my career.
My sense of ownership, responsibility, passion for learning and culmination of short term goals will help me achieve the long term goal: to be an entrepreneur and establish a consulting firm that focuses on providing efficient and highly scalable software solutions to clients based in the US, then eventually expanding to the Asian market. Coming from Indian origin, my business can benefit from my understanding of Asian as well as American culture.
Although my 10 years of professional experience helped me to mature and understand intricacies of business, in order to achieve my goals, I feel my leadership and management skills can be improvised by completing this program. I believe Langone MBA program from NYU-Stern can help me fulfill my dreams and become a well-rounded personality.
This is the first time I am writing an essay for my part-time MBA admission. Please help me to improve by providing your valuable comments. I overshot the word limit by few words (290 instead of 250), so please suggest wherever you feel I can reduce that.
Thanks in anticipation!
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What are your short-term and long-term career goals? (250 words)
I was brought up into being a very responsible person by a single mother working very hard to provide the basic necessities to her 3 children - good values, education and living standard. Seeing her, taught me to fight my own battles and be the best in what I do. After completing my formal education, I stepped into the professional world at an early age of 20 and gained diverse experience in different technologies as well as domains.
My short term goal is to apply my past experience, business acumen, technical edge and education to propose and oversee robust and cost effective engineering solutions, managing an effective team, experience key aspects of managing a business and achieve professional advances in my career.
My sense of ownership, responsibility, passion for learning and culmination of short term goals will help me achieve the long term goal: to be an entrepreneur and establish a consulting firm that focuses on providing efficient and highly scalable software solutions to clients based in the US, then eventually expanding to the Asian market. Coming from Indian origin, my business can benefit from my understanding of Asian as well as American culture.
Although my 10 years of professional experience helped me to mature and understand intricacies of business, in order to achieve my goals, I feel my leadership and management skills can be improvised by completing this program. I believe Langone MBA program from NYU-Stern can help me fulfill my dreams and become a well-rounded personality.