engineering of highest quality is not possible without a comprehensive knowledge of subjects and the aptitude to apply this knowledge to real world scenarios. THRUST will give me the opportunity to be a part of the most novel of engineering practices and research in today's environment. It will help me enhance technical skills and will prepare me
This material is too obvious. Anyone can say, "The program will prepare me..." and "achieving highest quality is not possible without knowledge.."... Anyone can say this, so it is not interesting. Do you know what I mean?
This part is much more meaningful and specific:
I loved studying Thermodynamics, Heat-Transfer, Fluid Mechanics and Thermal-Engineering the most during undergraduate study. I secured first position in pan-India recruitment examination conducted by TVS Motor where my work was largely limited to management of workforce, time and material. Working within tight deadlines in conformation with industry standards ...give me an opportunity to learn the intricate details of Turbo-machinery and Aeromechanics which I plan to apply in the development of new Green Technologies in Himalayas.---
All of this is very good, so I prefer the second essay.