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Please describe reasons for pursuing MBA program at this point in your life? Please specifically state why you choose ABC MBA.
Since I was young, I was raised to value good education because education is the ticket to a good life. Good education can lead to a good and stability career. Decision to pursue MBA Program is a first step to reach my personal goal and to get a better life. After my bachelor's degree in Business administration, I worked in an multinational company and I always think about further education and my future because I I always believed that I must have a higher degree.
The first reason for me to pursue MBA program is that earning an MBA degree will prepare me for management-level positions in the company. Due to the fact that most companies in Thailand prefer applicant who has completed post graduate degree to applicant who hold bachelor degree for working in managerial position. MBA program will allow more doors to be open for me.
Secondly, I believe that MBA program will support me to obtain my professional growth as well as a salary that has a potential to increase from MBA degree. This increased salary will support not only my life but also my family which is the most important thing in my life. It will also be my investment fund for running my own business in the future.
Thirdly, I am sure that all the knowledge I get from MBA program as well as my past experience will support me to achieve my goal; being a business owner.
Why ABC University? This is an interesting question for me. As I know that this is my time to pursue MBA degree, I start gathering information about universities in Taiwan which offer MBA program. I desire to study in Taiwan because Taiwan has an outstanding and high quality education system and scholarship. I personally believe that a great education can lead to a great future.
Among the top MBA programs in Taiwan, ABC University stands out. ABC University is Taiwan's top and leading university. It has the excellent academic reputation and MBA from ABC attract me with Real-World Case Studies, which will help me understanding the insight and updated business view today, and give students the opportunities to work directly with multinational companies.
Moreover, studying here will give me the opportunity to meet with local Taiwanese students and classmates from various countries. I will have a chance to understand Taiwan culture and cultures from around the world which will be the great advantage to me in the future in term of cross-cultural business connections.
All in all, I believe that ABC University's MBA will give me the ticket to a good life.
Thank you in advance.
Please describe reasons for pursuing MBA program at this point in your life? Please specifically state why you choose ABC MBA.
Since I was young, I was raised to value good education because education is the ticket to a good life. Good education can lead to a good and stability career. Decision to pursue MBA Program is a first step to reach my personal goal and to get a better life. After my bachelor's degree in Business administration, I worked in an multinational company and I always think about further education and my future because I I always believed that I must have a higher degree.
The first reason for me to pursue MBA program is that earning an MBA degree will prepare me for management-level positions in the company. Due to the fact that most companies in Thailand prefer applicant who has completed post graduate degree to applicant who hold bachelor degree for working in managerial position. MBA program will allow more doors to be open for me.
Secondly, I believe that MBA program will support me to obtain my professional growth as well as a salary that has a potential to increase from MBA degree. This increased salary will support not only my life but also my family which is the most important thing in my life. It will also be my investment fund for running my own business in the future.
Thirdly, I am sure that all the knowledge I get from MBA program as well as my past experience will support me to achieve my goal; being a business owner.
Why ABC University? This is an interesting question for me. As I know that this is my time to pursue MBA degree, I start gathering information about universities in Taiwan which offer MBA program. I desire to study in Taiwan because Taiwan has an outstanding and high quality education system and scholarship. I personally believe that a great education can lead to a great future.
Among the top MBA programs in Taiwan, ABC University stands out. ABC University is Taiwan's top and leading university. It has the excellent academic reputation and MBA from ABC attract me with Real-World Case Studies, which will help me understanding the insight and updated business view today, and give students the opportunities to work directly with multinational companies.
Moreover, studying here will give me the opportunity to meet with local Taiwanese students and classmates from various countries. I will have a chance to understand Taiwan culture and cultures from around the world which will be the great advantage to me in the future in term of cross-cultural business connections.
All in all, I believe that ABC University's MBA will give me the ticket to a good life.