Hi, I am applying for the master of nursing program, and need to have a statement of intent.
this is the requirement:
The application process includes an opportunity for you to consider your current preparation and future goals. This personal declaration will offer the admissions committee evidence of your knowledge, commitment, and the experience that you hold as you pursue advanced preparation in Nursing. Please address the following in a 1 - 2 page essay, which you will then upload on your student centre:
Describe your professional experience as a nurse to date and how this preparation has prepared you for future education in your chosen stream (direct practice, education, health systems/leadership. Clearly identify your practice/population of focus of your programs.
What has led you to apply for this particular graduate program?
What are your goals upon completion of the program?
Any additional information you wish to provide to the admissions committee.
I am looking for some writing help, feedback. and English is not my first language, so I really do like a grammar check. many thanks.
Nursing has been my passion since my childhood, I grew up in a rural area, throughout my childhood, my family has been in and out of hospital due to chronic illness or life threatening condition, I remember every time visiting them in the hospital and spending the time at their bedside, looking at the nurses come in and out of room providing the comfort care to my family. I knew they are busy with their heavy patient load from the way they rushing down the hallway, but each time when nurses came to the room , they took their time to provide comfort and compassionate care to our love ones who was taking the last few breathes in the bed. They took time to answer our concerns and provide emotional support at the most need it time. I am very thankful to this day how extraordinarily caring the nurses were in some of my family's darkest times. That sparked my nursing dream, and I decided to become a nurse to aim to give the same care and support that many nurses had done for my family.
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this is the requirement:
The application process includes an opportunity for you to consider your current preparation and future goals. This personal declaration will offer the admissions committee evidence of your knowledge, commitment, and the experience that you hold as you pursue advanced preparation in Nursing. Please address the following in a 1 - 2 page essay, which you will then upload on your student centre:
Describe your professional experience as a nurse to date and how this preparation has prepared you for future education in your chosen stream (direct practice, education, health systems/leadership. Clearly identify your practice/population of focus of your programs.
What has led you to apply for this particular graduate program?
What are your goals upon completion of the program?
Any additional information you wish to provide to the admissions committee.
I am looking for some writing help, feedback. and English is not my first language, so I really do like a grammar check. many thanks.
Nursing has been my passion since my childhood, I grew up in a rural area, throughout my childhood, my family has been in and out of hospital due to chronic illness or life threatening condition, I remember every time visiting them in the hospital and spending the time at their bedside, looking at the nurses come in and out of room providing the comfort care to my family. I knew they are busy with their heavy patient load from the way they rushing down the hallway, but each time when nurses came to the room , they took their time to provide comfort and compassionate care to our love ones who was taking the last few breathes in the bed. They took time to answer our concerns and provide emotional support at the most need it time. I am very thankful to this day how extraordinarily caring the nurses were in some of my family's darkest times. That sparked my nursing dream, and I decided to become a nurse to aim to give the same care and support that many nurses had done for my family.
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