My true introduction to the field of economics came early in 2006, after listening to Prime Minister Shaukat Aziz declaring in one of his interviews that "Pakistan has the second fastest growing economy in the world". Surprised by his claim, I began to probe into it by following up on news and events related to Pakistan's economy. Soon I found myself the realm of Economics. What I discovered was that by further opening up an economy and through effective policy management of institutions such high levels of economic growth were achieved. This made me appreciate, for the first time, the power of Economics in a convincing manner.
Good opening ... very convincing too : )
My years at Lahore University of Management Sciences have proven that my interest lies in economics and I want to continue studying it forman both international and financial perspectives.
Additionally, through interactive discussions related to case studies, it was amazing to see how educated judgments can be made even for uncertain situations through decision analysis.
I suggest you to change the organization of words very slightly:Additionally, through interactive discussions related to case studies, it was amazing to note that how educated (or intellectual???) judgments can be made through decision analysis even for uncertain situationsAfter getting a job , I hope to assist their constituent units in formulating an effective monitoring system and policies for enhanced performance.
---------- Since you mentioned about your interest in having employment with the ministry, I feel you need not to repeat that here. Straight away tell them your future plans : )At present, the link between academia and policy-making is weak in our country.
-------- i guess this is a very good pointIt's very well written ... GOOD LUCK!