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'Our mother and father are the best teachers'



amsh 1 / -  
Oct 18, 2012   #1
It is very likely that everyone would be asked about their best teachers. Their answering may be different, however; the majority of them believe that the best person who they learn them would be their mother and father. Their parents live with their children for a long time so that they understand them more efficiently. In addition; because their parents are their family they help their children not to attend to their benefits. I personally agree with this statement.

First of all, when a person would be the near us, they could be the best advisor. Our parents have lived with us from our child so that they know everything about us. They recognize the most important of our ability so they are able to guide us more beneficially. Moreover, our parents can influence in our future life since we spend our childhood with them. This time parents would have the much more effect in our mind thus we could be able to learn them quickly.

Second, the majority of people who want to help us may be for their profit. The benefit could not be important for our family at all. They would be interested in aiding us since we are their closes. It could be possible that they help me in difficult situations. For instance if we do our activity wrong reiteratively they would guide us kindly. It can effect in our mind that they do not punish us.

I hold the opinion that our mother and father are the best teachers for us. Not only do they perceive us in the best way but also they could be able to help us without attention to their investment. Thus we must take care from them when they will be old.

koreanincambo 6 / 11  
Oct 18, 2012   #2
I think you should try to use less pronouns. All the 'they', 'them', 'their' s are really confusing.


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