Orthopaedic Fellowship Applying Letter

Dear Sir:
I am writing to apply for the post of Clinical Reserch Fellowship in Hip Arthroscopy founded at the I.S. for Hip Arthroscopy webpage.

I am thirty three years old and I have been working in 2 regional hospitals (HSJ, Barcelona and HCS, Girona, Spain) at the Orthopaedic and Trauma services since june 2009 mainly performing trauma surgery. I also provide inpatient and consultant assintance when needed.

I graduated from the UNC, Argentina in 2005 and trained in the Speciality of Trauma and Orthopaedic Surgery betweenthe years 2005-2009 at the I Hospital of CĂłrdoba, Argentina obtaining the Specialist degree in 2010. Language would not be a problem since I am proficient in English. I graduated from an USA Highschool and I currently attending English classes in order to obtain the Advanced Certificate in English from the University of Cambridge.

I would describe myself as a hardworking and hands-on individual eager for professional development. Despite my short term experience I can proudly prove excellent references from every Hospital I have been at. In case you considered me as a suitable candidate I would be willing to have a personal conversation at your clinic whenever required. For more information I have enclosed my CV. I look forward to training with you in the near future.

I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
FA

This is my first writing at the forum and I'm willing to read corrections, suggestions and all sort of critics.
thanks a lot

as I said, you should write more about your academic achievements, such as GPA, publications, and the like. In addition, you should mention the reasons why you chose this place to apply to.