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Transition question (Christian philosopher...)



kjkar 1 / -  
Oct 31, 2009   #1
hi
i need help in transitioning this.
Boethius, a Christian philosopher during the sixteenth century, once said "music is so naturally united with us that we cannot be free from it even if we so desired" (qtd. in O'Donnell)"... Music is with us in whatever we do.

tnx.

EF_Kevin 8 / 13052  
Nov 2, 2009   #2
Hi there, if you need help with a transition, I have to see 2 things. Show me 2 things and I'll give you ideas for transitioning from one to another.

Maybe I am misunderstanding you; are you looking for ideas about what to write about this?

Oh, I see that you actually did show me 2 things. You actually dont need a transition here; you can just let that sentence (about music being with us) follow the quote as your explanation of it. then, continue by talking about the ways in which it is true. Can you list them?

Music is with us always, because rhythm is with us always. Start from there.


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