karan11295
Nov 30, 2011
Undergraduate / I would rather risk my grade than my integrity & passion -UC Prompt [4]
Nice essay, it's good that you stood up for yourself. But what attracts you towards ice skating specifically? Why is it, and not garlic and bicycle tires, your passion? Try to say that too in your essay. But the essay is still well written. You come off as independent and strong willed in it which is a good thing. Best of luck
Nice essay, it's good that you stood up for yourself. But what attracts you towards ice skating specifically? Why is it, and not garlic and bicycle tires, your passion? Try to say that too in your essay. But the essay is still well written. You come off as independent and strong willed in it which is a good thing. Best of luck