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beccalevesque   
Oct 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / IELTS: How to Allocate Government Expenditure [4]

As a matter of fact, an uneducated person who barely appreciates musicals, in all likelihood, iswould likely be eager to have professional skills to make money rather than amusement or enjoyment.

To relieve psychological burden, citizens need some ideal diversion to increase mutual understanding and ease their minds, such as enjoying a wonderful football game with colleagues aton the weekend andor taking a day trip to a theater.
beccalevesque   
Oct 9, 2011
Undergraduate / 'an Arabic interpreter at The Loudoun Free Clinic' - Extracurricular Activities [3]

The imprint tothat stands out the most comes from my role as an Arabic interpreter at The Loudoun Free Clinic.

A few years ago I became interested in the medical field and volunteering at the clinic has done anything but discourageencouraged me to pursue this career.

this is great :)
beccalevesque   
Oct 6, 2011
Undergraduate / Ready to complete English degree-Readmission Essay/Personal Statement for Application [3]

I value these skills and experiences, but I now realize that continuing my education and completing my degree will onlyallow me to further my future job opportunities.

I now know that I am ready to return to my education and complete my English degree, in order to achieve my new career goals. Needs re-wording

It's great that you include your goals. Thats very important.
beccalevesque   
Oct 6, 2011
Undergraduate / "Service appeals most to me." FSU Essay [2]

After that project, I was always eager to sign up for the service projects my youth group took part in.

I want to be a part of the successful community of students at FSU who value the importance of service and making an impact in the community as much as I do.

This is really good. You gave an example of your service experience and explained wonderfully how it impacted your life.

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