Undergraduate / MELIORA essay of Rochester. Meliora: ''Ever better'' - The University's motto [5]

PROMPT:Meliora: ''Ever better'' - The University's motto directs our focus toward continual improvement through learning, discovery, creativity, and enterprising collaborations among people with different points of view. Describe a ''Meliora'' experience from your life. (1000 Characters)

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Always amazed with celestial stuff I waited long to get in high school so that I would get the opportunity to study Physics and get hoards of knowledge in Astronomy. But alas our Physics course had very limited readings on Astronomy! Later on while searching in a library I found the book "For the Love of Physics" by Walter Lewin. I didn't know that this would be a life changing reading for me. So, coming back home I finished it as fast as I could with huge excitement. It was stuffed with so much knowledge on celestial objects and happenings that I felt, although my course didn't have enough astronomy topics I had gained enough knowledge through outside reading.

Later I discovered that even that wasn't enough because all there was in the book, was just the basics of a Astronomy and to keep myself improving in this subject I had to do further reading. From then I kept searching on the internet and kept reading what ever I found interesting, expanding the circumference of my knowledge. Still I am carrying out this endeavor of "Astronomy reading" to be ever better in my desired subject of study. That is the Meliora experience of my life.

Undergraduate / 'Providing me with my needs' - Rochester 1st Prompt Supplement [12]

PROMPT:Why Rochester? - The University of Rochester is one of two universities listed by The Carnegie Foundation for the Advancement of Teaching as arts-and-science focused, medium-sized, and highly residential, with comprehensive PhD programs, medical schools, and very high research activity. Both offer undergraduates an unusual degree of freedom in their curriculum. Which of these characteristics (or others) are leading you to apply to Rochester?

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There are many reasons for which I consider University of Rochester, the institution where I want to spend the next four-five years of study. I am really interested in researching and as U O Rochester is a vibrant research university I would get immense opportunities to pursue my research. In UOR I can take on research activities whenever I feel I have taken enough classes so that I can contribute myself to different research projects. Other than the research activities available year long, there are also summer programs for research projects. More amazingly, I can choose my research project or I can just join one under a faculty that interests me most. Thus I will be able do my research under a professional and gain both the professional and scientific way of working. This way I will be able to fulfill my desire for research, related to Astronomy and Physics. Also after contacting a student, Tanveer Arnob Karim, I got to know that, although I will be choosing Physics as major I would have the freedom to take any courses that I like as UOR has an open curriculum and I would have the till sophomore year to declare my major. I also came to know that there are many student organizations such as Astronomy Club, Alpine Skiing, Anime Interest Floor, Archery Club, Club Tennis, Outing Club and may more, of which many grab my attention. After getting confident that I will be able to gain all the experience and knowledge I want from a college I have finalized that University of Rochester is the university that will provide me with my needs and this is the institution where I want to do my higher education.

Undergraduate / (Meliora experience?) - meaning of Prompts [NEW]

I know that it might sound crazy but I am not just getting the thing what they want out of it. Couldn't make out some of the meaning at all.

The University of Rochester is one of two universities listed by The Carnegie Foundation for the Advancement of Teaching as arts-and-science focused, medium-sized, and highly residential, with comprehensive PhD programs, medical schools, and very high research activity. Both offer undergraduates an unusual degree of freedom in their curriculum. Which of these characteristics (or others) are leading you to apply to Rochester? In this Prompt, it's stating that both offers undergraduates facilities. But I can't make out which are the two!

Meliora: ''Ever better'' - The University's motto directs our focus toward continual improvement through learning, discovery, creativity, and enterprising collaborations among people with different points of view. Describe a ''Meliora'' experience from your life. Didn't get the meaning at all!

Make a rational argument for a position you do not personally support. For clarity, please state your true opinion first and then argue the opposite position. Consider an issue that has affected you personally. Should I just state something and begin arguing as another person? How should be the pattern of writing? Should it write it as dialogue between me and someone else?

Undergraduate / 'The EducationUSA adviser' - answer to the Dickinson Supplement [7]

From my very childhood I was fascinated with engineering. Since then my goal was to be an engineer. Understanding my interests in engineering I figured out that Physics is the only way through which I can reach my goal. But then I didn't understand the vastness of Physics which I do now. Now I know that I have way more opportunities than just engineering through Physics. As my interests have expanded I have also figured that studying Physics along with Astronomy expands my possibilities. Because a lot of things interest me only a liberal arts education can meet my requirements.

Sitting with the adviser at the EducationUSA and after a lot of research of my own I found out about Dickinson. I figured that I need a college that is small, private, diverse, and of course it has to have a good community. In Dickinson I would also get the opportunity to choose courses flexibly, one that excites me most and one that I would like. After meeting all the first hand conditions Dickinson meets one of my major requirements, it provides research opportunities. In Dickinson I can do my research in the Britton Observatory or in Plasma Physics or I can just start a project of my own! As my goal is to be a scientific researcher I just had to start all this from the beginning. Moreover I would have the laboratories to work in with state-of-the-art facilities and it just goes on. In Dickinson I also have the opportunity of 3-2 Engineering through which after getting a strong background in Physics I can go into studying Engineering, which is my dream. I have participated in a lot of community service programs here and I hope that at Dickinson I will also be able to involve myself with community service as it has a great community. I need a community that would be warmly welcoming me as I will be very far away from my home and Dickinson meets this requirement too. I am happy that after a lot of searching here and there, I have found a college that really meets my need and here I will be able to contribute with my leadership and volunteer skills. That is why I have chosen to apply to Dickinson and thus my interests, talents and goals fit with Dickinson's distinctive character.

Scholarship / 'Despite my interests...' (engineering / architect scholarship) [3]

This a scholarship essay I am writing to get my Standardized tests' fees and other kind of fees waived. I just need to show that I am unable to pay the fees and if it's convincing and written in a good way they will just give it.

I am Abdullah. I am currently a 12th grade student at my school intending to pursue my higher studies in the US. I am now preparing for my SAT and the Subject tests and researching for colleges. In spite of my great interest and enthusiasm my father is unable to pay for my test fees and college application fees. His income lasts only paying the household expenses and my school fees. He is trying his best to support my plans while I am trying my best with my School studies and the SAT stuff. I was thinking of joining college in the US when I was 14. Before that I with my family were to go to Canada. My uncles are there. They were supposed to sponsor us for immigration there. But for some type of family problem they didn't do that and all our plans didn't work out. One of my uncles is a Civil Engineer and another one is an Architect. Whatever position they are now in is all by their hard work. They all did their higher studies in abroad with full scholarships due to financial hardships. Hearing their stories I was also planning to get full scholarships for my higher studies as it's an honor to get them; but now it's a must for me to get a full scholarship because of my present situation. My father's now working double shifts and overtimes to earn a little more. Still he isn't able to get enough for our expenses, because gradually the expenses are just increasing. And thus he isn't able to pay for my test fees and other stuff. I am really in need of the opportunity because that's the only way I will be able to pay for my pre expenses to study in the US and fulfill my dream of being an Engineer.