Writing Feedback / CBEST writing practice: internet is useful or harmful for human? [3]

Your explanation about internet was good. You just have to focus on the grammar. By practicing more or reading more English will help you to improve your presentation skill on English. You can improve English by reading novels, listening to English news, movies with English titles and speaking in English will help you to improve your English and you can write best essays .

Undergraduate / One paragraph about my favorite space. [3]

Paragraph consists of at least 5 sentences Always start your topic with simple and don't start your paragraph with complex words. Initially your paragraph consists of more words. You should concentrate more on English grammar, vocabulary and verbs. By practicing more and reading novels you can improve your English and by writing more essays you can improve your writing skills. Don't use she, it , they, we. Instead of using different sentence in the last you can say the particular thing you are referring is changeable, stable, air, table. Separated by commas. There are lot of grammar mistakes in the sentence.

Scholarship / The success of maintaining good relations - CHEVENING Essay [4]

Your essay is good. As the topic is success of maintaining good relation you could explain about the relation you maintained in detail.Explain in such a way that it make the reader motivated. You should have good conclusion.

Scholarship / An effective leader or influencer - CHEVENING SCHOLARSHIP [3]

Good essay on effective leader. As in this essay told about yourself and a good conclusion where in you highlighted about the mission very well. Well explained about the leadership qualities.Last sentence you can use gain later instead of later gain.