Writing Feedback / Ielts - increasing demand of cosmetic surgery. 354 words [5]

TOPIC: INCREASING NUMBER OF PEOPLE ARE CHOOSING COSMETOLOGY SURGERY TO IMPROVE THEIR APPEARANCE?WHAT ARE THE REASONS?DO YOU THINK IS IT A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT?

the popularity of cosmetic surgery - what are the reasons?

Media influence on a society has risen dramatically to such an extent that most people are attracted towards cosmetic surgery to change their outlook.Major reasons for this negative trend are the impact of today's fashion industry on our society and the marriage trend in some countries.

The world of fashion and beauty has a drastic effect on the thinking of today's generation.It does not let us embrace our imperfections.People think that being beautiful from outside is a necessity nowadays.For such reasons, the common men prefer to have great looks.Thus, choosing cosmetic surgery for even minor deformities, such as, to reduce scarring on face, uplifting loose skin, removing facial hairs permanently etc.

The second reason is the marriage criteria in some Asian countries is totally dependent on the looks of an individual.Hence, unwillingly many young people desire to look flawless, so, they can get good proposals.For instance, In Pakistan and India, the rate of marriage is declining because everyone wants a handsome groom or a perfect bride.Rather focussing on their inner beauty and intelligence.Therefore, many youngsters opt for plastic surgery to enhance their features, such as, botox for lips, glutathione injections for fair complexion and minor operations to elaborate their face cuts/facial cuts? etc.Although, people are satisfied by becoming the epitome of beauty but they are ignoring the fact that all surgeries have some complications as well as contraindications too.

consequently, I believe that this new trend is having a negative impact on societies' thinking and development.It is leading to the fact that being natural is not acceptable and a perfect partner is the one who has no imperfection which is not true at all.

To conclude, the two main reasons for the higher demand of cosmetic surgery is the impact of the fashion world and the lust/urge to marry the perfect ones.Thus, having a bad influence on societies' thinking process and making them forget that natural beauty is best for all and people should adore/love their imperfections with confident.

Writing Feedback / Ielts - CULTURE AND CHARACTER FROM THE CHOICE OF CLOTHES? [2]

TOPIC: SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT IT IS POSSIBLE TO TELL A LOT ABOUT A PERSON'S CULTURE AND CHARACTER FROM THEIR CHOICE OF CLOTHES.DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? 258 words.

judging on the basis of an appearance

A personality of an individual is based on two factors, namely, customs and character.Sadly, most people consider that these factors can be judged on the basis of clothing.In my opinion, I totally disagree with this notion as people modify their dress-up styles relative to their environment while the character is a matter of ones' ideology.

To begin with, people living in warmer states when migrating to colder areas must follow the costumes of that particular zone.To elaborate this, natives of Pakistan, wear western clothes while staying in colder countries.Thus, abandoning their own traditional eastern wear known as ' shirt pyjama 'because it would be impossible to bear the cold breeze in those cotton wears.Likewise, their preference would be jeans and sweater.Therefore, a person's convention cannot be determined on the basis of his attire rather it depends on surroundings.

A character is based solely on an individual's faith.It is illogical to presume someone's individuality on the basis of their clothing style.To cite an example, recently in Pakistan and India, the cases of sexual harassment has filed up dramatically.The culprit behind such cases is mostly those who belong to an elite class or the God-fearing people, wearing expensive and modest clothing, respectively.Consequently, people consider them angels owing to their appearances which is totally absurd.Hence,it is better to assume the character on the basis of truthfulness and the behaviour towards others.

To conclude, an individual's character and culture are based on his beliefs and circumstances, respectively.People should refrain from this idiotic act by assuming someone's personality and custom on the basis of their outlook.

what we should use in place of shirt pyjama because it is shalwar qameez basically.
kindly evaluate.