Writing Feedback / Write a paragraph about mathematics [4]

the right approach to math

Some people think that mathematics is a difficult subject; however, if you know the effective ways I am sure that it will become easier and easier. First of all, you must practice mathematics as much as you can. Doing it day by day will help you improve a lot. Secondly, do not forget to be patient. It is the most important thing you need. When you have a complicated task, do not give up, just calm down, have a deep breath or take a rest and then do it again. Finally, make sure that you have someone to check out your mistakes. Maybe you can learn from them. It is helpful. I believe that you will find it simple to study mathematics whether you follow those steps.

Undergraduate / Ariana Grande is the person that I admire for her striking features [4]

WRITE A DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH TO DESCRIBE A PERSON YOU ADMIRE.

Ariana Grande is a person that I have admired more than four years. I started finding some information about her through her song 'Problem'. She was born in June,26th,1993 in U.S. She is not only a singer but also a songwriter and a actress.She began her career in 2008. Thanks to her talent and luck, she has received everyone's love and quickly achieved great success. In addtion, Ariana Grande has striking features that I can not take my eyes off. She is quite tall and really slender.

Especially, she is famousfor long thick brown poytail and swarthy complexion. She looks graceful with her deep brown eyes, straight edged nose and full lips. I was impressed by her sexy voice but powerful. She looks so great with good looking and her career. That is why she is my idol and the person I want to be.

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