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May 3, 2019
Writing Feedback / Statistics of underground station passengers in London during the period from 6am to 10pm. [3]
The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates data of Underground Station passenger in London during the period from 6 a.m to 10 p.m. Overall, it is clear that the highest commuters use the underground station of London at 8 a.m and 6 p.m.
At 6 a.m around 100 underground passengers can be found and this numbers peaked at 400 at 8 a.m, while those of passenger experienced a gradual decline from 8 a.m to 10 a.m, was 180. Compared to a decreased last period, the data of underground passenger rose slightly to 300 at 2 p.m, followed by a slip to 99 at 4 p.m. After 4 p.m the passenger number increased significantly and reaches to 380. During the remainder of this period, the data of underground users decreased with a slight fluctuation until 10 p.m.
In conclusions, the highest number of passenger of London underground can be found in the stations during office going and office leaving time a day.
Thank you in advance to help improving my writing skill
The Underground Station passenger numbers
The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates data of Underground Station passenger in London during the period from 6 a.m to 10 p.m. Overall, it is clear that the highest commuters use the underground station of London at 8 a.m and 6 p.m.
At 6 a.m around 100 underground passengers can be found and this numbers peaked at 400 at 8 a.m, while those of passenger experienced a gradual decline from 8 a.m to 10 a.m, was 180. Compared to a decreased last period, the data of underground passenger rose slightly to 300 at 2 p.m, followed by a slip to 99 at 4 p.m. After 4 p.m the passenger number increased significantly and reaches to 380. During the remainder of this period, the data of underground users decreased with a slight fluctuation until 10 p.m.
In conclusions, the highest number of passenger of London underground can be found in the stations during office going and office leaving time a day.
Thank you in advance to help improving my writing skill
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