Writing Feedback / Present received from someone [2]

a self-help book

On my latest birthday, I received a lovely present from my special friend. I was surprised at that time because he was far from me. It's a self-help book, which is one of the most famous books for the young people in Viet Nam. When I first saw it, I was impressed by its cover. It's simple with the blue color and the white title. This book has many stories and life experience of the author, which provides the knowledge, studying and how to interact with peolpe more intelligently. Therefore, it's strongly useful for the young, who has already finished high school education and come to the new steps of the life like me. I read it a lot of times and highly recommend it. I love reading books, so this book is one of my favourite presents I ever received before. Moreover, the friend who gave it to me is special to me. I will read it more and keep it carefully.

Writing Feedback / Task 2: It would be necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to learn [2]

It would be necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to learn how to bring children up.

Do you agree or disagree?

In light of the innovative world, the personal advancement of children is an issue that governments in some countries keep an eye on. Many people argue that parents compulsorily involve in a training course about being parents to nurture their kids well. From my perspective, I strongly agree with this state of view.

First and foremost, It has to be admitted that children's training courses are helpful to some extent in raising parents' awareness of children's health problems. A child who is under five years old easily gets sick because they do not have enough original prevention from harmful factors such as bacteria or viruses. Apprehending more knowledge about childcare, parents would be more confident in caring for children when some troubles happen. This approach also reduces their financial resources and time since they can deal with minor problems. In some circumstances, it is necessary for parents to be able to implement first-aid treatment in an emergency situation. For example, when a child can not breathe due to an airway foreign body, we have to do Heimlich immediately.

Secondly, parents joining childcare courses would be trained to teach their kids essential and social skills. Children are sensible and fragile. For example, they do not aware of what wrong they are doing when they make some mistakes and even imitate some dangerous actions. It is required to comprehend their mentality and make sure that they can avoid social evil in the future. Learning how to attitude and treat them is crucial for parents, which leads to better development in both the physical and mental side of a child.

In conclusion, giving access to childcare education to parents need more resources and concentration because of the huge advantages that courses bring. Although it is difficult to encourage all families to participate in this strategy, I believe it should be adopted widely.