Writing Feedback / ielts writing task 1 pie charts showing export between The US and Vietnam [2]

export between The US and Vietnam

The Pie chart illustrates exchange of various goods worth million$ between The USA and Vietnam. Overall, in exchange business from Vietnam to The US contribution of coffee is highest and that of garments and other goods is lowest. In goods transported from The US aircrafts parts seems to make to the top of the list and car to the bottom.

Coffee accounts for about quarter of the goods exported to The US ,which is the highest. Rice and Seafood share similar value in exchange business to The US of around 4.3 and 4.4$millions respectively. The export business of fruits and vegetables is around 16$million from Vietnam .Lowest among all goods transported are garments and some miscellaneous products valuing of about 2$million.

Aircraft parts are the highest valued (72$million) product exported from The US. Vietnam also imports machinery and other products of worth of 30.5$million and 35$million respectively. The least value is added by car to the export business which is of around 6$million. Fertilizers contribute 16$million and cotton around 12$million to the exchange business.

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Writing Feedback / ielts task 1 : the diagram below shows the manufracturing process for making sugar from sugar cane [2]

The diagram illustrates step wise process of extracting sugar from sugarcane. Overall, there are 7 steps clearly depicted ,but the process starts with growing sugarcane in the farms and finishes with drying and cooling sugar syrup in large open containers.

The starting step of sugar making process begins with growing sugarcane ,which takes around 12 to 18 months. This is followed by harvesting them ,that can be done using 2 methods, one is manually cutting sugarcane or by using big vehicles, which have choppers attach to them.

In subsequent stage sugarcane is crushed by using crushing machine into sugarcane juice. This juice is further purified using limestone filter.It is then passes through an evaporator, which is constantly supplied by heat. Here sugarcane juice is converted into syrup. The next step is centrifuging the syrup to separate it from sugar crystals. The last and the final step is drying and cooling ,which turns sugar syrup into sugar.

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Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 1 : the diagram shows the process for recycling plastic bottles [2]

how plastic bottles are recycled

The diagram illustrates the procedure for recycling of plastic bottles. Overall, it consists of 9 major steps, starting with throwing of plastic bottles in dustbins and finishes with converting them into various daily use products.

When we throw plastic bottles and other things into dustbin, it is collected by a garbage truck. These trucks collect trash of all over the places and move them to recycling Centre. Here in the center garbage is sorted and plastic waste is separated. This plastic waste is converted into compression blocks, which makes further work easier.

These blocks are crushed by passing them into the crushing machine and are washed. After this they are put into the machine, where they are turned into plastic pellets. In subsequent step pellets are exposed to heat in order to form raw material. Once the raw material is created it can be further use for development of other products. In the final step this raw material from plastic bottles can be used to make various products like clothes, bags, stationary even bottles and food containers.

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