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Posts by desukanani
Name: Truc
Joined: Jul 11, 2023
Last Post: Sep 17, 2023
Threads: 1
Posts: 2  
From: Vietnam
School: University of Economics Ho Chi Minh

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desukanani   
Jul 11, 2023
Writing Feedback / Every year several languages die out. Many thinks life will be easier. Agree/Disagree? [2]

the most popular languages displacing the local languages



Some languages lose their importance resulting in some people thinking the fewer languages, the easier life could be. I utterly disagree with those statements as the disappearance of a variety of languages is an alarming signal of cultural diversity restriction. Later on, the tradition of the country missing its tongue may be forgotten by its citizens. This essay will discuss why language diversity should be respected and conserved.

Spoken languages today are the remains of the past when the languages do not only evolve from verbal to both lingual and written forms but also being influenced by existing social contexts. In other words, language is an abstract remnant of human's activity from the past, reflecting people through an old, vivid scope. Hence, mankind is living under an ever-developing digital era where traditional values could fade away. The Vietnamese spoken language has been nearly the same for 4000 recorded history and Vietnamese people have long expressed and spread life lessons via idioms, songs, and other forms of art, ect encouraging young generations today can partly understand the historical and political situations and respect the past days. As a result, protecting the language is preserving the culture coming along with one country's evolution. Some think many languages fading maybe a huge benefit for those not wanting to learn language

Additionally, a language virtually spoken by a specific nation makes the country distinctive from other countries and saves a country's freedom from evil forces. Back in the day, Vietnam was rich in mineral and oil resources, making its way to be the one of the victims of Western forces' colonization scheme. Numerous patriots stood behind bars for protesting against the US invaders but the US forgot a key measure helping them plan the strategy to beat the bad guys in the jail without the US jailkeeper knowing - Vietnamese.

In conclusion, in any context people should try to conserve the language in any form or at least make minus shifts depending upon the modern moral principles to fit these days' concept while respecting and maintaining the core value of a language representing a nation's pride and custom.
desukanani   
Jul 14, 2023
Writing Feedback / Risk-taking phenomenon - careful evaluation and calculated choices [3]

"both social and individual status" : the original topic really diverges into another one which is confuse.
You seem to be an expert of paraphrasing but the essay is off-topic in the first place so It cannot receive TA score despite great statements and examples you have.
desukanani   
Sep 17, 2023
Writing Feedback / Do you think owning a home rather than renting one is very important to people? [4]

You don't follow what the topic is asking - whether you go for renting a house or owning one. In case your essay is mediocre, your ideas are not dipping into detail as i only see two point: given statements while examples unclear. Very poor ideas for an alarmingly social issue, hope you find a good read to figure it out.
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