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Do you think owning a home rather than renting one is very important to people?

Truong Dang 1 / -  
Sep 6, 2023   #1

renting vs owning a home

In our industrialization and modernization era, the daily needs of humans have increased rapidly in terms of properties and facilities. Specifically, in some countries, people are immersed in working to possess an individual house rather than rent one. In this essay, I will indicate why this trend inclines to be a negative aspect of life development.

Firstly, the biggest disadvantage of renting a home is that the cost of renting may increase by the landlord and cannot be independent of your life activities and privacy. For example, you have to obey the rule like 'no pet' or' don't make noise',...

On the other hand, setting out to be a homeowner is regarded as many people's aspiration because it demonstrates their wealth and social situation status. Thus, people struggle to spend a lot of money attached to a huge loan from the bank to buy a self-owned home as if it is a must-have human life-long achievement.

However, this tendency doesn't necessarily to pursue an urge. Because it will result from a bunch of invisible finance burden fees such as tax, electric bill, and utilities costs, ... Therefore, instead of buying an ideal personal house, they should concern about their career prospect pathway and ensure their gross revenue sustainably.

In conclusion, while many citizens own homes to show a high sense of social position and asset status, ..they should consider both sides of this decision and reorient their desire to suit their background and income .
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Sep 16, 2023   #2
You have incorrectly responded to the question and will definitely receive a failing mark for this essay. You were being asked to explain which is more important, owning or renting a home? You responded that this is a negative development. Your response will be judged in the TA section as being unrelated to the topic, thus giving you an immediate failing score. She have forgotten that you cannot deviate from the given discussion instruction. By creating your own discussion, you have failed to follow instructions and as such, cannot be given a passing score. You will be given marks for grammar and clarity of thought, but not for task accuracy, which is where your failing score will emanate from.
Sep 16, 2023   #3
@Truong Dang
i feel like you did not grasp the question you were asked to respond to. Vocabulary used is top notch but the whole answer will be considered incorrect
desukanani 1 / 2  
Sep 17, 2023   #4
You don't follow what the topic is asking - whether you go for renting a house or owning one. In case your essay is mediocre, your ideas are not dipping into detail as i only see two point: given statements while examples unclear. Very poor ideas for an alarmingly social issue, hope you find a good read to figure it out.

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