Writing Feedback / Holiday at home or abroad - ielts writting task 2 [2]

In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday.

Do you agree or disagree?

In today's interconnected world, people have unprecedented access to information through smartphones with internet connections. This wealth of knowledge has become invaluable, opening up new possibilities for businesses and tourism. I firmly believe that in the future, more individuals will opt to vacation in their own countries rather than traveling abroad. Several factors support this viewpoint.

Firstly, the cost of international travel can be prohibitively high. When tourists venture abroad, they often face unexpected expenses, which can strain their budgets. Additionally, the weather and cultural differences in foreign destinations can be unsettling for travelers. Take, for instance, my uncle's experience during a trip to Thailand last summer. Although he won a free ticket through a game, his child fell ill after trying the famous Tom Yum dish, leading to a day spent nursing their sickness. Moreover, the unfamiliar smells in local markets affected his family's well-being. These anecdotes underscore the challenges of international travel.

Furthermore, travelers often underestimate the richness of their own country's traditional culture. Many assume that they already know enough about their homeland or consider their culture outdated and uninteresting. However, in reality, numerous individuals are dedicated to preserving and promoting their traditions daily. Both teenagers and adults recognize the cultural value within their heritage and strive to share it with the world, particularly with younger tourists. A prime example is the growing popularity of the Old Vietnam Museum on social media, where Vietnamese teenagers skillfully lead efforts to engage and contribute to the museum. This demonstrates the untapped potential for tourists to explore and appreciate their own cultural heritage.

In conclusion, those with health concerns should carefully consider international travel and perhaps seek assistance from tour guides. It is imperative that we support and foster our country's traditional culture to preserve and develop its unique brilliance. By exploring and valuing our own heritage, we can create a more meaningful and sustainable tourism industry for the future.

Writing Feedback / Living away from home during university? - Ielts writing task 2 [2]

Students after graduate high school seperate to two type. The first type has more choices than the second type in choosing the place to live and study when step on university. Most people though living far from home is include many benefits than risk. In my point of view, i see a huge different when live at home with their parents and live in the other city or country and i believe that disadvatages and advantages are equal for each scenery.

Their trust and convinient must be the huge point relate to students who stay at home while university. They can focus to studying without fill their mind with rent money, learn take care theirself, keep stay away from bad people. Only thing they could do well is study hard and looking for part time job for experiment. Otherwise, trust and convinient repace with Fear and uncomfortable with student who live far from home. The main reason not only people in that country but also the poor knowledge about it too. We grow in our country for almost 18 years and when we start to familiar with that, we have to go to another. In general, we can say that a night mare for everyone.

If we can exchange disadvantage, the result will be a dream for every student who still live with their parents while university. We can count some advantage like confident, experiment, survive skill, persuade or speaking with strange people and one more thing make every student dream about is chances. We can refuse some student are scare of new things, new people but when they get through of it, there nothing can stop them anymore. For example, most people who live in some huge city is from other country or city, because the thing they see is is a chance, a new life.

At last, advanges or disadvantage is still a sight of each person, the main thing here is not something external they see as usual, that a internal affect from they mind. Sometime we disconnect with ourself because we looking for external reason a lot and ours mindset of living just go away like that. I believe that the advantage and disadvange are equal with live near family or live alone, the different is just the scene.