Jfils
Nov 19, 2009
Undergraduate / "Coming to America" (How has your family influenced who you are) [5]
How has your family history, culture, or environment influenced who you are?
No matter where you go, you must never forget where you came from, and the obstacles you have crossed. The struggles my family have gone through has taught me to appreciate everything I have and the vast amount of opportunities presented to me.
My family roots trace back to the 3rd world country of Haiti, where I was born. I was born into a poor family in the city of Port-au-Prince. Even though we were never wealthy, my grandmother always wanted better for us. My mother was a single mother trying to raise three children in a state of overwhelming poverty. Despite the staggering obstacle which wouldn't fail to stop most in their tracks, my grandmother was determined to give us a better life. Through hard work my grandmother was able to obtain a ticket to the 'promise land', America, which seemed like a different world to the people of Haiti. My grandmother promised my mother that she would stop at nothing to ensure us a better life; that being said she embarked on her mission. While in America she was able to hold down a job and saved her money wisely. After many years she was able to buy tickets for my mother, brother, sister, and I to begin our new life in America. I feel there is nothing I can do to repay her but to show that I understand what she had to go through, and making the best of what has been given to me.
I would hate to think of where I would be if it wasn't for the resilience and bravery of my grandmother. At a young age I was brought to America, escaping a future that would otherwise be filled with hardship. I appreciate this every day of my life. This has contributed to everything I am today. Thinking of the sacrifices made to ensure me a good life motivates me beyond anything else. It fuels me to try hard in everything I do, and appreciate the opportunities given to me in this country, while remaining humble. I know my family wants me to succeed, though my mother or grandmother have never gotten a college degree they continue to support me.
I want to make my family proud, and achieve the success my family worked so hard to give me the possibility of having. I will never forget where I came from; my past is what motivates me towards a great future.
Would appreciate any feedback and any revisions. Thank you for reading my essay.
How has your family history, culture, or environment influenced who you are?
No matter where you go, you must never forget where you came from, and the obstacles you have crossed. The struggles my family have gone through has taught me to appreciate everything I have and the vast amount of opportunities presented to me.
My family roots trace back to the 3rd world country of Haiti, where I was born. I was born into a poor family in the city of Port-au-Prince. Even though we were never wealthy, my grandmother always wanted better for us. My mother was a single mother trying to raise three children in a state of overwhelming poverty. Despite the staggering obstacle which wouldn't fail to stop most in their tracks, my grandmother was determined to give us a better life. Through hard work my grandmother was able to obtain a ticket to the 'promise land', America, which seemed like a different world to the people of Haiti. My grandmother promised my mother that she would stop at nothing to ensure us a better life; that being said she embarked on her mission. While in America she was able to hold down a job and saved her money wisely. After many years she was able to buy tickets for my mother, brother, sister, and I to begin our new life in America. I feel there is nothing I can do to repay her but to show that I understand what she had to go through, and making the best of what has been given to me.
I would hate to think of where I would be if it wasn't for the resilience and bravery of my grandmother. At a young age I was brought to America, escaping a future that would otherwise be filled with hardship. I appreciate this every day of my life. This has contributed to everything I am today. Thinking of the sacrifices made to ensure me a good life motivates me beyond anything else. It fuels me to try hard in everything I do, and appreciate the opportunities given to me in this country, while remaining humble. I know my family wants me to succeed, though my mother or grandmother have never gotten a college degree they continue to support me.
I want to make my family proud, and achieve the success my family worked so hard to give me the possibility of having. I will never forget where I came from; my past is what motivates me towards a great future.
Would appreciate any feedback and any revisions. Thank you for reading my essay.