davidlin1992
Dec 27, 2009
Undergraduate / 'the importance of education' - STANFORD- intellectually engaging experience. [5]
Overall is pretty good, but if I were you, I'll change the sentence "Without learning all that before" into something like "Luckily, the knowledge that I learned before came into play. The previous knowledge about Holocaust helped me provide a sufficient explanation for the...." But in order to use this sentence you have to change the original sentence a bit to make it fit...
Overall is pretty good, but if I were you, I'll change the sentence "Without learning all that before" into something like "Luckily, the knowledge that I learned before came into play. The previous knowledge about Holocaust helped me provide a sufficient explanation for the...." But in order to use this sentence you have to change the original sentence a bit to make it fit...