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Posts by viwagude
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viwagude   
Aug 24, 2010
Undergraduate / "rugby was my best sport" -Using 150 words, activities or events and experiences [4]

My name is victor i need someone who can check my essay and offer constructive and astute criticism will be highly appreciated.

Experiences and challenges have broadened my vision of mankind and made me a proactive person. As the journalism and law club editor, I faced immense pressure, Students demanding a magazine and the administration slap: lack of funds made our idea of success a mirage. In the end, perseverance made us win making the first successful school magazine in the halls of history for the club.

In the field, rugby was my best sport. Not only did i learn a great deal of teamwork, playing as the winger position earned me a crown scoring points and leading from the front as team captain.

After high school, I joined "The Young Elite" youth group. The programme based on drug use and abuse, Environmental cleaning, Ethics and good health, Mentoring and Education. It was the best avenue of profound personal growth in community development.
viwagude   
Aug 25, 2010
Undergraduate / Princeton Supplement, Short Answer: Past 2 Summers [11]

The essay has a good flow of thought and it engages the reader to have a picture of how you spent summer. I think it will be wise if you could have each event to have its own paragraph unless you have a word limit. e.g the driving lessons you can expound how intresting it was and the experience you had
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