Poetry / "My Sleepy Girl" - is this poem fine? [7]

Hey all,
I am a writer by no means! This all just popped into my head to day and i had to write it down. Just want to see if it is any good. I don't even know if it is formated correctly, please help me out with anything that comes to mine.

Thank you!!!

"My Sleepy Girl"

Rhythm of my heart and my sleepy girl's breathing,
Her almond eyes that have fallen asleep,
Lips like silky red ribbon,
Inviting and alluring me,
Her face drenched in night moonlight,
Comely and beautiful still
The glow of her body warming my skin,
Watching her breast rise and fall like the ocean sea,
As she lay her head down on me,
Covers like clouds lay over her hips,
Enticing me ever still,
And the smell of her hair,
Lingering on my skin,
I've been claimed by her scent once again,
Playing the night over and over again,
Letting that night never end,
My sleepy girl's breathing,
My heart still is beating,
...again and again, again.

Thoughts?