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Jul 15, 2008
Writing Feedback / HAVE YOUR EATING HABITS CHANGED SINCE YOU'VE BEEN IN COLLEGE? [4]

Yes, I believe that I have changed eating habits since I've been in College. There are two reasons why I did change. One reason is that I want to be kept better life because it's an important to the right food for health in daily and second reasons; I need to decrease my weight.

Firstly, when I began college in Washington, DC, I had generally healthy eating habits, a product of having lived with my parents as Pakistan and Canada food. In my first month of college life, I tried to continue these habits even though I noticed myself that I dislike to eat American foods such as junks, burgers, too higher calories, and not similar Canada or Pakistan foods. I realized that I have an increased about closed to 15 pounds in the end of semester. Hence, I ate some chocolate cake and ordered pizza deliveryman. These are not health food.

Fortunately, since my first year, I have learned that I will have to adjust the right foods for change habits. I also take responsibility for my own eating habits. I now know how to change habits. That means my mom will not be able to watch over my shoulder to make sure I have eaten my carrots instead of slipping them to the dog; I will have to do that job for her.

In conclusion, I reckon I did change for eating habits since I attended at second year of college. I have also realized that when I eat better, I need to be careful with my health what calories I usually food for daily. I felt like to begin more dependable and do better in the future.
zoh   
Jul 16, 2008
Writing Feedback / Is stereotyping a problem in today's society? [2]

Stereotyping is a huge problem in today's society. It should be stopped in some way or reduced because of bad influence in kids and teenagers. Stereotyping is cruel and easy to make a habit.

First, don't you think stereotyping is painful to some people? Almost all white people think black people are dangerous because they heard from news, friends, videos or advertisements that have been trying to say that black people will hurt you. So when a small group of friends see a dark skinned man, they will avoid him because they know that he is going to harm them. They never knew that the man is nice and not going to do anything with them. Wonder how he felt when he saw them walking away. This may hurt his feeling.

Second, stereotyping is one of the easy habits to make. People used to be told many positive and negative things about something or someone, which may be a stereotype. For instance, one girl used to listen people's negative opinions about a skinny women modeling. Now, she got her own opinion but didn't realize that her opinion is negative because she hasn't heard any positive thing about the model. So go on, she listens to other opinions about something else and got her new opinion that is similar to them. Don't you think that is simple to make an opinion by themselves?

To conclude, stereotyping creates many different problems on media that affect people's thoughts. Without stereotyping, we would learn a lot of truths around the world instead of believing others' thoughts.
zoh   
Aug 10, 2008
Undergraduate / Do you think that you are going to be successful business in the future? [2]

"This is a good question for me because I am unable to predicate what will happen to my future. However, I always desired to be business some day and there are a few reasons why I want to be business. The reason is that my dad was a former businessman and is now retired. The second reason I want to be in business is that I have wanted to be a millionair since I was a child.

My dad frequently told me about his job experience; what it was like and how it took several challenges and how they were a part of his life. He also want me to become business and he said " Keep in your mind to succeed in general business, How?, in participating in marketing with companies like Nike that you will pick a group that will help you get what you are looking for." Hence, he made me interested in world business, international business, and marketing.

I made the decision to pick business as my career in the future. I love building trust and relationships and seeing how I can help others. In addition, this is a great way to stay visible and give back to groups that have helped me in the past.

I believe in myself that I will be successful in business in the future. Because I am confident and have abilities in organizing connections in world business. Otherwise, This is my strong desired to be business person as career as I want.

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