Undergraduate / 'a great education for a low cost,' Virginia Tech Application [2]

So I have to write three "optional" questions in under 250 words to help me get into VT. My grades are a little less than average and im still waiting to take my SAT. I truly think that I have a good chance into getting into Virginia Tech with early decision. OK so my first response is to "What are the top five reasons you want to attend Virginia Tech?"

Virginia Tech has all of the characteristics that i look for in a great university. When looking for a prospective school I first look at the location of the school, VT has a great location in Blacksburg. It is very reassuring to know that the Blacksburg police department and the Virginia Tech Police department work together to make sure the community is safe. Secondly I look at the National ranking of the School, at 71 I know that i would be receiving an excellent education. Third, I look at the average class size, with a 16:1 student teacher ratio I would have a better relationship with my professor enhancing my chances learning more. Fourth, I look to see what majors they offer for their undergraduates, with my dream of owning my own business, I know that the Pamplin College of Business would be a giant leap toward my dreams. Last I look at the tuition cost, Virginia Tech's low tuition I could have the opportunity to receive a great education for a low cost. Virginia Tech is a great school, and I am honored to have the opportunity to be considered.

Please help, All suggestions are helpful!!
Thank you

Undergraduate / 'when my family broke' - VT short answer [2]

So i have to write a short response for a "If there is something you think would be beneficial for the Admissions Committee to know as we review your academic history, please take this opportunity to explain." I think this fits please let me know what you think

When I think of the word "family," I think of unity, but when I think of my "family" I think of broken. You see my oldest sister gave birth to my niece, Allison, on December 4, 2009. Incapable of taking care of her, Ali came to my home 2 days later. With both of my parents working they were unsure of being able to raise a 10th child. My sister, Megan, and I decided that we would do whatever we could to help. We set up a crib in her room and were up at all hours with Ali, even if this meant I had a test the next morning. [...]