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in my opinion,
without the help of our brave and courageous leaders such as Theodore Roosevelt with the aid of other protestants, segregation in the mid-twentieth century wouldn't have ended.

Essays / could u check my thesis; is it strong enough? [8]

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Letters / a letter of recommendation to a congress man (into the us airforce) [8]

introduction
Congress Man ...
it gives me a great please writing to you about this matter. Joining the air-force been one of my greatest aim and dream in life i would like to accomplish and will do my possible best to enroll myself in.

Letters / a letter of recommendation to a congress man (into the us airforce) [8]

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Scholarship / Conversation with Jesus-Jimmy Rane Foundation Scholarship [3]

i really like this but if you could embellish it with some coated scriptures in the Bible it well be great, especially about Baptism and the body of Christ.

Research Papers / (selling a block of shares in Utopia) - MY BUSINESS LAW ASSIGNMENT [5]

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Dissertations / (research proposal for Master's thesis on spatial audio)-how strong is this argument? [2]


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Letters / a letter of recommendation to a congress man (into the us airforce) [8]

please help me correct my errors and embellish it with your word. this is just two fifth of the letter.

CONGRESS LADY NAN HAY WORTH,
It gives me a great pleasure to be writing to you about this matter. Joining the United States Air Force has been one of my greatest desires, and one of the most important things I will ever do. I will work hard and do my absolute best to accomplish this. My interest of joining the air force begun when i was in first grade, this dream of him was beyond recognition. My mom being the most inspirational figure in my life always inspired me to be best in any kind situation i get myself into. at a very tender age my made me join the boys scout association went for camps and also exposed me to a religious organisation and other types of organisation which helped instill or inculcate a kind of leadership and problem solving situation personality in me.

Ever since i migrated to the United States, i realized it had the best military academy not only in the nation but also in the world. this country serves people with different kind of opportunities which makes it unique. i have be motivated by veterans and other people to join the air force, even my grandfather who joined the army because it is one of the greatest places to be in life. So i always ask myself how to be enrolled in the air force academy.My desire to serve this great nation and to attain the rank of a military officer has decided my future.

Writing Feedback / 'More convincing' -TOEFL whether face-to-face communication is better [2]

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i need a letter of recommendation from a congress man but am not able to contrive about anything to tell him in my letter, and i think the best way is to talk to him or her is through face- to- face.

Writing Feedback / An essay on "Protecting the Environment" campaign [4]


based on


actually there are many steps that can be taken

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where are our community leaders concerned about the environmental conditions (in the town or society)


in nurturing the in development of the environment.


one of the steps that can be used to carry out this protect of "protecting the environment" is through campaigns


by hosting campaigns and meetings, this will generate more awareness and will educate the people in the community about their environmental conditions.

i have to leave but am not done yet

Letters / a letter of recommendation to a congress man (into the us airforce) [8]

how should i make it formal can you please help me . this is also a rough draft.