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Joined: Feb 20, 2012
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kigali1   
Feb 20, 2012
Graduate / 'addressing violence against women' - Masters in Public Health PS [4]

One of the significant aspects of my trans-national, multi-cultural childhood was being able to witness the range of power structures between groups of people. These structures varied from classism, to racism, to linguistic and national superiority. However, a dominant force of oppression that I recognized across different communities and countries was the gross power imbalance between men and women. My academic and work experiences helped me further examine these power structures and solidify my realization that a social environment privileging certain bodies over others leads to a slew of aggressive behaviors. This realization formed the basis for my interest in gender-based violence research, advocacy and human rights.

In order to gain deeper practical experience after graduation in the different aspects of addressing violence against women, I joined XXX, the largest national level women's rights advocacy body in [country name]. The overarching focus of my work is to understand gender-based violence as a health issue and employ a life-cycle, multi-dimensional approach to effectively address this phenomenon. I have carried out extensive research and analysis of legislations pertaining to sex selection, domestic/intimate partner violence, dowry harassment and child marriage. This has enabled me to gain crucial experience in examining a law and its implementation status from multiple angles. An integral part of my work involves analyzing budgetary allocations at different governance levels, assessing entry points within the health care system for responding to women victims, and delineating the numerous socio-cultural factors contributing to violence against women.

Additionally, I served as the coordinator of a multi-stakeholder project funded by [main donor] and other international donor agencies that focused on sex-selection and domestic violence. I was actively involved in two significant aspects of formulating comprehensive social justice initiatives: research and advocacy. In this regard, I developed research tools to undertake base-line and end-line surveys, analyzed the data obtained, compiled the information into advocacy documents, and met with various governmental officials to advocate for effective implementation of women-friendly laws. Through my experience in two imperative, yet vastly different, components of working for a violence-free society, I have come to understand the integral role of research in strategizing and informing advocacy.

My undergraduate education in Biology/Psychology enabled me to develop a strong background in both the social and natural sciences. The diverse array of courses, along with my demanding internships, has provided me with a solid foundation in qualitative and quantitative analytical skills. I have been able to extensively utilize these critical thinking tools in my present job, especially with regards to analyzing various policies from a women-centric perspective and developing comprehensive, multi-sectoral approaches to addressing gender-based violence.

As a result of my academic, work, and life experiences, I have been able to witness and study how violence against women has become a public health crisis across the world. Though this fact is recognized by a number of human rights and medical communities, the scale of response remains dismally inadequate. This can be acutely seen in [country name], where, despite having some of the most progressive women-friendly laws in the region, there continues to be a gross lack in implementation and awareness generation within an overwhelmingly patriarchal social environment. Hence, I plan to focus my graduate education on women's health issues, with an emphasis on gender-based violence research and advocacy. My educational and internship background, combined with working for a non-profit, advocacy organization, has ensured that I am capable of both applied and fundamental research. It has also prepared me with the necessary documentation and organizational skills required for the rigor of graduate school.

The Masters in Public Health program offered by YYY University provides students with the necessary knowledge in both research methodology and the analysis of health policy, which are integral components to effectively advocate for better law implementation and development. This program is especially of interest to me because my long-term goal is to work for an institution focused on using advocacy strategies aimed at addressing gender-based violence as a health issue through action-oriented research. Additionally, I am looking forward to learning from the multi-cultural faculty and their diverse perspectives of handling public health issues. I also hope to bring in my own experiences and outlook to classroom discussions and debates.

After completing my Masters in Public Health, I plan to apply for a second Masters degree in Women, Gender, and Sexuality Studies. I feel this would give me a holistic perspective in understanding my field of work and would adequately prepare me to continue contributing to the developmental sector, both in [country name] and globally.
kigali1   
Feb 25, 2012
Writing Feedback / Essay about whether creative artists should express their ideas in public freely [5]

Art has been at the centre of many contributions to society's development. Nonetheless , this should not mean that artists are given absolute freedom to express their ideas in whichever way they wish.

To some extent, I am for the idea that artists express their feelings properly. After all, our country is democratic, everyone has the right to show their ideas and feelings, including artists. What's more, the masterpieces artists create can enrich our culture, making our life clourful and attractive.

However, on the other hand, it is unwise for government to allow artists to express their feelings freely. Government should establish restrictions on artists due to a number of important reasons . Here are some reasons.FirstlyFor example , some certain ideas related to violence or pornography isare detrimental to teenagers, because most teenagers have no prominent ability of differentiation, so they are more likely to be misled. Take Japan for example.This may be seen in the case of Japan , which is famous for its animations, but the makers of it (a kind of artist), add many violence elements to the animations, which is often reflected in the high crime rate in Japanhas been in a high level.Secondly,Additionally,with the emergence ofagreat many different ideas emergethrough artistic output , conflicts between artists will ensue. In history, many wars broke out due to cultural difference. So A creative artist can'tmay not be able to bear other artists holding opposite ideas to her or him, especially in the public. this is a common sense. Last but not least, the mainstream values might be ruined by too many different ideas. So the ideas which go against the mainstream values should not be allowed in the public.

In conclusion, it is positive to offer creative artists a platform to demonstrate their outstanding abilities, but doit is important to remember that they must do it properly and that needs thesomerestrictive laws should be in place .

**** I hope you find this input useful :)...I have one more suggestion; when you talk about "mainstream values" that should not be destroyed, perhaps you can give a few examples of these values (because there certainly are mainstream values we should not tamper with, but I think there are others that could use a little artistic input/rebellion! :P)
kigali1   
Feb 25, 2012
Writing Feedback / (Subccumb to / Athlete, singer, honor / Mascara) Help my introduction [3]

Haha, I love that you have 3 different starting paragraphs! I tend to struggle with coming with only one!

I like the first one alot actually...especially when you bring in the gravyards (a bit morbid on my part maybe...? :))...however, i also like the third one. It shows you level of interest and passion for the subject. However, if I absolutely had to pick, I would say the first one is my choice.

Good luck with university!
kigali1   
Mar 3, 2012
Graduate / Question regarding using same SOP for 2 graduate programs within same University [4]

Hi!

I am considering applying to two different graduate programs within the same university. I was wondering whether sending the same SOP (slightly tweaked, depending on the focus of each program, but otherwise, no major changes) to both these programs would negatively impact my application. Would I need to write two completely different SOPs? My experiences, goals and ideals can't change, so it doesn't really make sense to me if I have to totally rework on the SOP for the 2nd program.

Thanks and I hope someone can help me out!
kigali1   
Mar 3, 2012
Dissertations / PhD on Social Networking Websites / Marketing / strategic Management - topics [10]

I think the basic premise of social media/social media marketing will remain the same. So, even if Facebook loses its luster, and a number of other networking sites come up, your research would still provide some valid information (especially since Facebook, Myspace etc. were at the forefront of social media/networking).

Cool topic, btw :)
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