Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing Task 2 : About Overweight [2]

In your first paragraph you should make it clear what you want to say in the following paragraph, in my opinion.

Writing Feedback / IELTS, Change look is good or not? [4]


This is a fragment.
Your writing has a good introduction. However, the following parts are somehow inflexible. Along with several wrong grammar points is the lack of support ideas. You should add some of them.

Writing Feedback / What is your approach to problem-solving, and how does it work for you? [4]


I think you should change to: "plenty of people face the same problems with you"


They always care "enough". Remove it.


I think it is generally "the problem"

Your writings is good, though. One bad point here is that there are so much repetitions. Paraphrasing is the solution.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL; Words Speak Louder Than Words [5]


sense of truth

I don't see what role that "laziness" plays here. You should make your idea more clearly, such as "Speaking is meaningless without following action (expand this idea)"

One thing definitively can be seen here is repetition. Keep paraphrasing.

"Last but not least", your title is wrong.

Writing Feedback / [IELTS] Problems and solutions for regional unbalance? [14]

You deserved a five stars.
Just a small thing here


-> equity, not equality