Student Talk / 'Composing mail' - written skill problem [12]

I am facing problem in written skill. please suggest how should I improve it. When i wrote any mail to my boss then i'm always confuse & take more time to compose mail.

Writing Feedback / brings equality, create unity; Should schools strickly enforce dress codes? [5]

The place where children gain knowledge with discipline is called as school. Most admiring thing is students from all community comes under a roof. Virtually dress code helps to bring that equality. Its represent the name of their school. It also create unity in students. They learn to keep clean & neat.