Writing Feedback / Having two phases - Information gathering & Analyzing; Approach of problem solving [3]

People use different solution methods:
1. Define the problem.
2. Reasons why the problem occured.
3. What do you expect out of this problem?
4. What are the resources available?
5. What are the additional resources needed to reach a desired solution?
6. Work on it and keęp the fingures crossed.

Undergraduate / FSU College Essay - The Importance of Leadership [3]

You have mentioned some really good points. And you should make a little elaboration of about your role at Palmer Trinity School. Leadership is a quality that is indispensable to learning, service, and global awareness. These are some of the really good points that a common reader can easily catch. According to me you should make it a little enlarged, otherwise okay. Good luck!

Graduate / SoP Admission - PhD (Environmental Anthropology) - main contains [3]

I think more than 500 words are enough for this essay and the choosen topic is also very good. You should include the more detailed points of Climate Change Impact in Bangladesh and its effect on common people of Bangladesh.

Undergraduate / 'standing at the podium' - UC: Prompt #2 [4]

Your essay is really wonderful and nice to read. The introduction and concluding paragraphs are really nice and clearly indicates that you want to express. There is nothing so that i can advice you. It is really great. Nice.

Undergraduate / 'Practical and abstract reasons' - finding direction on Common app transfer essay. [5]

You have done well. The best thing you can do is clearly state exactly what the admissions officials want to know. Make it clear about your goals. Otherwise okay.