Writing Feedback / Gilgit Baldistan the paradise like motherland [6]

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Gilgit Baldistan are they safe and sound?

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"We were having a happy life, our system is based upon harmony for hundereds of year, they [sectarian violence creators] destabilizes all" says on anonymously, a student from Gilgit currently enrolled in the BUITEMS University of Quetta, Balochistan.

Muhammad Khan from Chathral the bordering city of Khyber Pashtoonkhwa with Gilgit Baldistan illusturate "Gilgit Baldistan were well known for the peace and union the community had", adds further "we were having them as an example of peace, they have lived here peacefully for centuries".

Gilgit Baldistan the paradise like geography, culture, civilization and people, they are ancient Greece and later Afghans, their bad fortune to be part of Pakistan, no matter their community on the other side of the border in Nuristan and Baldistan of Afghanistan are having a safe life and enjoy every sort of fundamental human rights. I don't think they will remain happy here [in side Pakistan], every day shouldering the funerals of loved ones. So, we can ask, "won't Afghanistan be an attractive place for them rather than current Pakistan"?

"Our relatives with whom we are having blood relations, we have many girls married to them live freely and with peace inside the 4 decades of war torn Afghanistan" told Laila a lady health worker from Gilgit, "Our forefathers decided to be part of Pakistan for the cause of Islam, that was the day of our bad fortune, that's the reason now we slaughtered under the same title of Islam".

Why and who changed this paradise like motherland of Gilgities and Baldistanies into a hell? Who are responsible for the sectarian violence on this land of harmony, peace and stability? Everyone is aware of the circumstances and history, or if not then just have a check on the martial laws of Pakistan, specially the era of Gen: Zia Ul Haq, sewed the most dangerous seed of violence, hate and terror. That has claimed thousands of innocent lives just on the name of sect.

Paradin Tarin a Phd scholar from the department of Area Study Center at University of Balochistan tells, "The Gilgities and Baldistanies were having the strongest social system, they were united, they would have lived for thousands of year with the same system unless the current violence had erupt".

It's very hard to live in an area where you are not having any chance to survive due to the ferocious and barbaric phase of sectarian violence [the most dangerous form of terrorism]. Let's pray for the people of Gilgit Baldistan be safer. And this Muhram passes on with harmony and peace.

Writing Feedback / My Biography (a freelance journalist, contributing writer, and activist) [3]

Mr. Abdul Malik is a freelance journalist, contributing writer, political and youth activist, human right worker in Quetta, Balochistan Pakistan. He has worked with a democratic political party Pashtoonkhwa Milli Awami Party believing in struggle for democracy, social justice, gender equality, national equity, human rights and human fundamental rights, peace and security, the said party is struggling for the sovereignty of Afghanistan and is anti to the conservative and so called religious, extremist and terrorist organizations and the foreign policy of Pakistan being engineered by the Army establishment. He has been struggling for last decade as a political activist paving the way for a democratic governmental setup in the country, freedom of speech and all fundamental human rights. In this way he has arranged many political programs, have been part of election campaigns, students and youth activism and their recruitment in PkMAP and PSO. Being a senior cadre of Party and Organization, he has trained several teams working with him in political activism, press and media section of the party secretariat. Have worked for VOA Ashna Pashto service for two years a freelancer and live reporter, writes for [policymic.com a US based organization working democracy and media.

Undergraduate / 'Pashtoon family' - Personal Background and Professional Experience [3]

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In 1984 on July 6th I opened my eyes in a Pashtoon family, living in the city of Chaman district Killa Abdullah Khan, Balochistan next to a gate on boundary line between Pakistan and Afghanistan. After attending my primary schooling in Primary School Chaman, later went to New Government High school Khairojan Baghicha [garden] and in 2002 I did my matriculation and took admission in Government Degree College Chaman as a regular student of Pre-medical. At the time joining my premedical classes, Pashtoonkhwa Students Organization the student political wing of Pashtoonkhwa Milli Awami Party [a Pashtoon Nationalist Party] that is struggling for democracy, national equity, social justice, fundamental human rights [specially gender equality, rights to education, health and employment], peace, stability and depending the sovereignty of Afghanistan, anti to the conservative so called religious politics and the role of Pakistani spy agencies in creation of complex formation of terrorism and extremism.

My involvement in student politics took ten years, while I participated and actively took part in political struggle of Pashtoonkhwa Milli Awami Party for the implementation of the manifestos, during the one decade period I took my position as college unit secretary, then district Killa Abdullah secretary of the organization, University of Balochistan secretary, District Quetta [well known by Quetta shora] secretary. Beside the central committee member of the student wing, soon I got a promotion to Party press secretariat and have been working there for last five years, I also did my graduation as bachelor in science and double masters, first in Biochemistry the second in Mass Communication from the department of media and journalism at University of Balochistan. Being on different posts of Organization and Party, I played my role in recruiting students and youth for party politics, campaigning for our manifesto implementation, as an adviser; taking part in local bodies, provincial and national elections, being assistant to party chairman in the field of media and international relations, did my job as international coordinator, press and information committee member of Party.

Even, it is hard for a progressive and Democratic Party's activist and political worker to do dual duties at a time, but I did and manage to do so. In 2010 I started reporting as a freelancer for Voice of America Ashna (Pashto) radio service, covered the controversial province of Balochistan; about 100 live reports of mine were on aired. I am a contributing writer to many organizations, one of them is policymic a New York based organization for media, democracy of new generation; they have published my several articles on different issues, most of them about the war on terror and Afghanistan Pakistan ties, Pakistani spy agencies role in Politics and creation of terrorism.

Living in a country, where target killing, bomb blasts, sectarian violence, ethnic violence, religious extremism, terrorism are on their peaks was a very confusing decision for me; slowly I got familiar with all risks and have felt security threats during my political activities, journalism job and research work.