Writing Feedback / How should girls and boys study? Should they attend separate schools? [2]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Boys and girls are the most important part of our society in which they are living. These people are the parents of their generation. Some people agree that boys and girls should attend seperate schools while others would disagree. In my view boys and girls should not attend seperate schools. This is mainly for two reasons.

First if they are in same school it will give change to them to understand each others nature. As they attend same school they will have lot of activities like playing sports,studying together and interact with each others in discussions or debates on some subject topics. Also by having such activities together both should not shyness of differnt sex. For example as my elder brother completed his education upto tenth standard in boys school. that time he was living in hostedl away from family for four years. After finishing his school last summer he came to home. In my family my elder sisters marriage activities were going on. There were many relatives came to live. One of my uncle's relatives daughter name Radhika was also came here. Once she want to go ouside and had some urgent work. But nobody was free. So my father told my brother to go with Radhika and have shopping. On whole day my brother was with her but he had not a single word with her. Even they didnt have lunch together. it may happened because my brother was from boys school which makes him very difficult to adjust with girls. As you can see have only boys school made my brother difficult to adjust with girls. It will also difficult for his future life to understand girls nature.

Second it is not feasible from economy point of you. As India is underdeveloped country. Almost seventy percent people depended on firming. Their source of income is either job or bussiness. In India most of the people are poor. There are some people who are still struggling for getting their bread of the day. Their are many people who died because they dont have enough money to buy medicines. I find in pune city there is a village names Chakan. this village has only one school. Around from five to six villages children came here for education. Schools dont have good roads. All such problems are here because economy of India is not good. As you can see contry dont have enough money to fulfill the basic requirements of people then how should we expect that they will have different schools for boys are girls. this is not possible. This experience taught me that from economy point of you it is difficult for India to have different schhols for boys and girls.

In sum, even though some people agree that boys and girls should have different schools. But i am disagree not only it will create problems for boys and girls to understand each other but also it is not possible from economy point.Every country should have schools where boys and girls laern together.

Writing Feedback / Students are the people who get knowledge from teachers in classroom and laboratory. [3]

Students should evaluate teachers; Reasons

Schools are the very important part of everybody life. These are the places where student get knowledge. This knowledge help them to grow their future. Some agree that schools should allow students to evaluate teachers. Others would disagree. In my view school should ask student to evaluate teachers for two reasons.

The main reason is that this is the better method to evaluate teachers. Students are the people who get knowledge from teachers in classroom and laboratory. Thay have direct interaction with teachers. students can easily find the mistakes. They learn from them how to read, write and speak not in the class but also ouside the school. For example in classroom there is lecture going on mathematics subject. Mathematis professor was very careless every time at the time of teaching. Most of the time he misses some information in the lecture which was very important for exam point of view.Teacher teach each and every formula to students. But once in my school there were around twelve formulas in the book . But the teacher teach only half of them. Than one of my classmate who is very intellegent raise a question to the teacher. He asked teacher that why he teach only half of the formulas. That time teacher come know his mistake. He apologise the whole class. As you can see student have direct contact with the teachers he can easily find out the errors professor made.

Another reason is that performance of the teachers will improve. If the teacher will not teach well the result of his subject will lower. If the result of the class is lower the salary of the teacher should be decreased and if result improve then we should increase the salary. This will benefit not only to the teacher but also performance of the student will be increased. For instance I know one Rayat Shikshan school where my elder brother Amit completed tenth. In his school they have teaching methods. One of the English subject teacher Prof Gore give hundred percent result of his subject. Also students recommend Gore's teaching methods are nice. So school has decided to increase his salary. Also the salary of other professors decreased simulataneously because their result were poor. Other teachrs feared because they come to know that students evaluation paly crucial role in the teacher performance they try to teach with hard working. they teach studnts unless they understand the topice very well. This experince taught me that this method will help the teachers as well as studnets for their growth.

In sum,Stuents should evaluate teachers. This will not only evaluate the teachers but also performance of the teacher as well as student will improve. So every school should adapt this method.

Writing Feedback / Now a days technologies have became a very important aspect of everybodys lives! [4]

Now a days technologies have became a very important aspect of everybodys lives. These are the things we are using in our day today life like cell phones,computers,laptops. Some belive that with the help of technologies students now a days can learn more information and learn it more quickly; others would disagree. In my view with the help of technology students can learn more information and learn it more quickly for two important reasons.

The most important reason is that information is easily accessible from anywhere and anytime. By using laptops with internet connection user can send emails easily and quickly. Also he can view the live telecast of cricket matches from any part of the world. He can also download movies,music and audio files with fast downoad speed. For example, in old days students have to do their college assignments in laboartory because there were no perconnal computers and internet connections. Thay have to attend every lecture and practical. Now with the adavncement of technology students can do their practical asignments from cyber cafe or from laptop. They can send the completed assignments through email to professor. they can also attend the online lectures of professor from home without attending college or school. Sometimes they can also download pdf file format books from internet without having to pay money. It saves lot of time to go school and they will not be tired by travelling. It made their life simple. As you can see with the advancement of internet students can easily send and receive information.

Another reason is it makes they complicated things in more understandable. Sometimes students not understand the lecture of professor in class because he taught from books without any slide shows. But if he taught with some pictures or images then this visual appearance will give better idea of the lecture. It makes their life simple. For example I remember my last years biology class experience. professor was teaching us how how body structure is and how all parts work. He was teaching the definitions. But only few students understood it. it became too complicated to understand. Most of the students compalined about the lecture. Next time professor made some slides on computer and teaches the flow. This visual appearance gave us the clear picture of internal body structure of human beings. Even today also i remeber those images. So this experience taught me that with the help of advance technology lide slides from computer software gave students the better idea of the lecture.

In sum, even though som e may disagree that with the help of technology students are ditracted.Not only it makes information accessible easily but also make complicated things in more understandable ways. I think every scool schould adept the technologies so improve the performance of the students.