Research Papers / Thesis Statement with 3 points (global warming) [15]

you should give 3 reeasons why you believe mankind is causing harm to earth's atmosphere

Graduate / Statement of Academic Objectives (graduate program in taxation) [6]

try to focus on one event that influenced you to join taxation..

Book Reports / Jem's Maturity; To Kill a Mockingbird [7]

I think you should prove your thesis by using the format "context, quote, followed by analysis" in your body paragraphs

Essays / "Ambition" essay - how to start it? [14]

Think about experience in your life where you felt ambitious? What caused those ambitions? When do people feel most ambitious?

Student Talk / Took the IELTS Today and didn't go as I expected :( [35]

Well how do you feel? There are many directions you can go with such a vague topic. For example you could argue "I think they should pay for the pollution they cause" and argue their responsibility and accountability etc...

Undergraduate / Women's Safe House, volunteering - Common Application Essay [34]

It may be a little too long, I would suggest shortening it a bit and be more specific.

Undergraduate / 'Student-run clubs' - Johns Hopkins Short Answer [16]

It's supposed to be only 150 wordS?

Writing Feedback / Dress code is an epidemic. Colleges and universities shouldn't have a dress code [4]

I think you made a great point. You explored your views and made a great argument for your case.

Undergraduate / "I am a novice to this country" - VCU Essay.... what is unique about me [6]

Show your readers of what you're capable of doing and your aspirations. Don't just show readers your obstacles but how you overcame them and how you intend of prospering through life.