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Posts by Tan Huey Yean
Joined: May 19, 2009
Last Post: Aug 25, 2009
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Tan Huey Yean   
May 19, 2009
Essays / Is father or mother who play the more important role in building up the children [8]

Can someone please help me with the essay "Is father or mother who play the more important role in building up the children?" ?

Please check for the first paragraph:
Under the cover of pitch-darkness, a man about 27, who only have a father in the family was being arrested in involving the bank-rob. One might hesitate, pause and ponder. What initiated him? Who inspired him? What embed in his head and ingrained in his mind? Consequently prompted him into such an ill fated encounter even at the risk of the "final count-down" of his lives. However it is certainly a glaring commentary on the shocking deficiencies of the education of a family.

Please help me to continue the essay.Thank you.
Tan Huey Yean   
Aug 25, 2009
Undergraduate / Money or Health [10]

can i start the paragraph with

More often then not, the paradoxical among universal never end by its own, not specific for ancients and yet an enigma for generation today. And so emerge the controversy among the importance of money and health, some persist money is more important while equal number of that think the other way. Ever since the invention and advent of the item money, it is still not uncommen to see the philosophers nowsaday controversy about that topic, through there be so much blood of them as was in those of the ancients.
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