Writing Feedback / 'it is not permanent'; enjoy your money when you earn or save for your future [2]

Every person in the world needs to earn. It is very important for their life. When they earn, the person can enjoy with their money or save their money for some time in the future. According to my opinion, it is better to save our money for our future.

Firstly, a person needs to face different kind of expenses. It might be an expected expenses such as education of their children, marriage purpose etc. For example, in our society when a girl wants to marry, their parents need to give dowry to the boy. It would vary depend on the places. Therefore, the girl's parents need to save money for their daughter's life. Moreover, nowadays the education system has become very modern and very expensive. Anyone can't arrange that much of high amount of money immediately.

Additionally, sometimes people face many unexpected expenses such as medical purpose. For example, nowadays most people effect by different type of diseases such as cancer, brain humor, kidney failure etc. People never expect that it would affect them or their family members. However, they need to get treatment. But, it costs high.

On the other hand, when people's younger period of their life, most of them like to enjoy with their earning money. Besides, they feel that they have just come out from their parents' grip, they are totally independent. They enjoy their life with his friends. Additionally, they go to restaurant , have fun and celebrate parties. Further, they visit to cinema and go around the country. Definitely, it is happy life. They don't need to worry about any things. However, it is not permanent. When they need to settle to their family life, they face many difficulties without money in hand.

Finally, when people are in his younger age, they would be physically fit. It allows them to work hard than the latter period of their life. Addition to that, they can earn lot of money and save for their future expenses. It would create a wealthy and prosperous life of a person.

Writing Feedback / Toefl- The qualities of a good neighbor - should be sociable and helpful [3]

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Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

It is a god gift that having good neighbors who live near us. Whether we have an own resident house or rending place, we can't choose our neighbors. According to my opinion, if we get good neighbors who is very helpfulness and friendliness, our life would be lasting very smoothly and happily.

To begin with, if our neighbors are very sociable, we can acquaintance with them easily and then tied-up our relationship step by step. Consequently, both of us can understand each other easily. For instance, when I was studying for advanced level exam, our neighbor was not very genial person. Although, they knew that I would have exam by the next month, they listened radio by having high volume. It made me so many disturbed and I couldn't concentrate well on studies. On the other hand, if they were very amiable people, I would have easily explained my situation or they could understand themselves.

Additionally, other significant character of neighbors should be very helpful. If they are very supportive, we can help each other all the time. Every member of our home can't be there all the time. In some urgent case, some people would immediately give hands without any hesitation. For example, my brother is living far away from us. Once, when his wife was pregnant and he was not at home too, she got unconscious. Then, their neighbors took her to hospital and informed him. Then, after the treatment she was alright. Because, the neighbors were very kind, they gave their hands on time. It was a great support to him.

Finally, in my opinion, neighbors are having strong influence in our life. Even though, some people say that we are nothing to do with neighbors, if we get great helpful and friendly neighbors, it would give more benefits than nothing.

Writing Feedback / Toefl - going to classes should be optional for the students [2]

Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

University students have different opinion about their attendance to class. Some students believe that they should be required to attend classes while others believe that it is an optional for the students. According to my opinion, because it is university level of education, students have enough maturity to choose their choice. Therefore, I strongly agree that going to classes should be optional for the students.

To begin with, going to classes are sometimes waste of the time. For instance, some lecturers in our university read the same text in the reference books for that particular course module. Further, they didn't explain the contents in order to understand by the students. It was waste of the time. Because the university students have grown up, they have enough ability to read and understand the text book. Moreover, with the modern technology, students can collect more information from different sources. For example, from the Internet, students can read many articles and e-books and can watch video tutorials which provide the information more apparently. However, some lecturers deliver lectures very informative and interesting way. When the students attend that lectures, they can obviously feel that it was very useful and they did not waste their time.

Additionally, mostly university has taken whole day for the lectures. Besides, most of the university students are working students in order to manage the expenses during the education time. Students need to work as part time basis. Hence, they have to schedule the lectures time, studying time and working time. At the same time, rather than attending any boring lecturers, students can participate to other activities such as debate competition, swimming meet, Basketball and so forth. From that they can meet other university students and build up the relationships with them.

In a nutshell, although few brilliant lecturers deliver more informative lectures, some are boring the students in the class and wasting the students' time. When the students go to university, they have matured mentally and physically. They have enough knowledge to choose what they need to do. Therefore, to make use of time, if the students choose the classes as optional, it would provide more benefits than drawbacks.