Essays / Who Am I Essay for University Dorm Application?(short) [3]

I'm not sure what a slumbook-type-info essay is, but it shouldn't be that formal, yet you should not be too informal either.

You should address the person, state your particulars (name, age) and write your request and reason for applying. You could add on some traits about yourself that you feel would be important for your recipient to know. Ask yourself, are you a responsible person? etc.

I'm new too! Hope this helps c:

Writing Feedback / A Touching Story; a dog that I found when I was 10 years old [6]

"Until today, I still remember the very dog that had moved and touched me when I was 10 years old.

I was playing football with my father, who was the goalkeeper, when I accidentally kicked too hard, causing the ball to fly out of the football field. As I was heading over towards the ball, a stray dog burst out of nowhere, hit the ball with its head and rolled it over towards me. I got a fright and wanted to flee due to my fear of stray dogs. However, this dog seemed different from the rest and appeared to be friendly and harmless.

The dog stopped before me and wagged its tail excitedly as it stared at me purposefully. I had the vibe that it wanted me to throw the ball, which I did. Immediately, the dog chased after the ball and brought it back to me. I wanted to keep the dog but after persuading my dad, he finally agreed. We brought the dog home and bathed the dog in the car porch. That night, we took the dog to the vet for a medical checkup, and at the same time, purchased a couple of necessary items for our new dog such as dog food and a leash. We decided to name the dog 'Rocky'.

The next morning, I went on a stroll with Rocky. Every Sunday, we would play boomerang together. We spent a lot of time together whenever I was around. One morning..."

Hey 'englishlover'! I've tried my best to edit the whole essay and I hope you like it :D

Writing Feedback / The possibility of choosing the physical characteristics of a child! [4]

kdr98, just a tip, when it comes to writing opinions, you should always use words like ' I ' and write your emotions and feelings towards the topic.

Essays / Cyber bullying need to stop - how to write? [5]

First off, you need to TRY writing a draft first. Don't expect everyone to immediately write a whole essay for you. We're here to give input and feedback but we're not people who are here to do your work. I'd definitely advise you to search the web on articles on cyberbullying. There's plenty of it and I'm sure you will have some form of inspiration and ideas on what to write.

When you're done with that, draft out the main points you want to include in your essay and we'll see what we can do to help :)

Essays / Testimonial Writing; words to describe myself - Need Advice [5]

I don't really get any of your answers.. I'm asking how I can put these traits into sentences.