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Posts by Hang Le
Name: Hang Le
Joined: Apr 13, 2014
Last Post: Jun 13, 2014
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From: Viet Nam
School: Economics University

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Hang Le   
May 25, 2014
Writing Feedback / to acquire some certain skills, people usually need to be trained by education [5]

Question: It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

Dicuss both views and give your opinion.
In the one hand, some people believe that a child can be taught to be a talented person. This statement may be based on the truth that in some areas, practicing skills are more important than gifts. Aerobics, for example, is a sport that might not need much talent and by teaching or training, children can gradually improve their gifts.

However, it is obvious that education methods are not applicable to some areas. People working in art like musicians or singers are good examples. If a person has no natural talent in music, no school can teach them to be an excellent artist. In other words, innate talent cannot be taught and obviously just with teaching methods, another Mozart or Beethoven is hardly found.

Personally, I totally agree that some people are born with their natural talent and this gift cannot be taught by any education methods. Nevertheless, without regular train, no one can keep their innate talent forever. It is certainly true that many people lose their ability due to the lack of practicing and therefore, they cannot be excellent sport players of singers.

In conclusion, it is true that to acquire some certain skills, people usually need to be trained by education but without talent, people in some areas such as arts or sports cannot become excellent.
Hang Le   
Jun 11, 2014
Writing Feedback / Ielts - fast food is good or bad? [10]

Goverment and people equally responsible to fix the problem pertaining to fast food consumption by reducing number of fast food industries ,and encouraging traditional food preparation at home.

I think it's hard to reduce fast food industry because this business is legal. So if the question doesn't mention to the solution, i think do not put it in your essay because it's controversial
Hang Le   
Jun 11, 2014
Writing Feedback / 4 types of landfill waste in Molovia, Bratistan, Atlantis, Senia and Vatania [7]

The graph compares the data of 4 types of landfill waste in Molovia, Bratistan, Atlantis, Senia and Vatania in 2010. Overall, the percentage of construction waste was higher than the other waste while agriculture waste was the smallest category, with the exception of Batista.

Noticeably, Atlantis, Selenia and Vatania had fairly distribution of different kinds of waste. These countries had highest proportion in construction waste, at around 30% each, but smallest level in agriculture with just under 20%. On the other hand, there was around 22-25% of landfill was electronic waste, while the figure for household waste was 25%, 29% and 22% respectively.

In comparison, Molovia and Bratistan had different profiles. Agriculture waste in Bratistan had the highest rate among the five countries, at about 55%, but the figure for electronic was smallest with only less than 5%. In Monolovia, household waste and construction waste had the similar rate with nearly 35% while electronic and agriculture waste was the same, accounting for 15% of the total of landfill in this country.
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