Writing Feedback / TOEFL, "Tell the truth" - People need to have some friends who are trustful. [3]

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One of my friends, actually now is not my close friend since a long time, got in a big trouble when she could not stop lying. After being known as a great liar, she lost all of her close friends. I, myself, believe that one to have a great relationship with other people should be honest and tell the truth due to a lot of advantages, for instant, having a friendship relationship, getting flourish, and feeling good.

First, I have profound relationship just whit people who I can trust them. One would be able to attract a quit a few people by showing them that how she/he is trustful. People need to be honest in their contact even in a bad situation. having friends who are close to them, people would be able to be in society activities which is possible just by being trustful and telling the truth.

Second, although telling a lie sometimes, individual could achieve some goals that he/she needs in order to succeed; all the people prefer to have deep relation with who do not hide the true. Since being flourishing would be accessible just by being honest, people should not conceal the truth in order to climbing the thriving steps. One day their lie would be revealed and they would lose their position. So it would be a good reason to tell the truth even when tempt to lie.

Finally, whenever someone tells a lie, after just a short time he/she feels conscience. Telling not true, people spend a lot of energy and time to ingest the lie which may disturb their relationship with their friends. By telling the truth, we could shame the devil. Indeed nobody is interested to endanger his/her relationship by hiding the truth. Whit no doubt nobody is excited to here a lie especially from friends.

In conclusion, by taking all above reason, it is crystal clear that by telling the truth one would be more friendly and successful. People need to have some friends who are trustful. Also by a short glimpse we found all the thriving and social people trustful.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL: Next 20 years - transportation goes ahead and novel version of automobile will be produced. [4]

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In this developed world, everything has a deadline. People are able to use food, clothes, electrical instrument to name but a few just for limited time. I believe also cars are going to be expired in twenty years. In this regard, to explain why there will be fewer cars than today, I elaborate some reasons, for instant, public transportation will be increased, new instrument will be invented, and pollution would be considered more than today.

To begin with, people imply car for traveling not only through the city but among a different cities, even countries. Developing public transportation, people's demands for using a personal car would be decreased. They would have more comfortable and safer travel by using public transportation. Also, one would prefer to go on a trip by train, airplane and ship instead of personal vehicle due to higher speed and high level of security. In this regard, in future people would be less depended to their own car, so the finite number of automobile would be exists in cities.

In addition, by a short glimpse to the past, we could see that all vehicles are evaluated during years. People used to use horses and camels for traveling and community, while acting in this manner is meaningless today. Inventing new and high-tech way for traveling in future, humankind will not imply the car as a instrument. The car would be soon a part of museums.

Last but not least, the more number of cars, the more polluted air, which we breathing every day. In order to decreasing the pollution, governments and scientists will limit or even omit the car from the cities. Although car has a vital role in human life and makes it convenience, people need clear air to be survived.

In conclusion, by taking all above reason, I believe in next year people would use fewer car as the transportation goes ahead and novel version of automobile will be produced. People prefer to have a clean sky to live longer instead of finishing their life after a short time in automobiles.